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Ready Or Not

Soaked To The Bone

Kinely’s POV
“Louis! Get your fat butt out here!” I yelled. So, long story short, Louis convinced me to go on an actual date with him. Louis skipped out and picked me up and spun me around.
“Yeah, yeah. Now will you please put me down?” I asked giving him some sass. Louis set me down.
“You do realize I am 3 years younger than you, right?” I pointed out.
“Yes,” Louis nodded. I rolled my eyes.
“Let’s go,” I said.
Kinely's Date Night Outfit
We walked out of the hotel and to Louis’s car. He opened the door for me and shut it once I got in.
“Where are we going?” I asked.
“Well, most likely to a club,” He replied.
“Lou, I’m only 18,” I said. I face palmed myself.
“You’re 18! Legal in...Oh,” He trailed off.
“Yeah, legal in England! You have to be 21 here!” I said.
“So then, let’s go see a film then?” Louis asked. I nodded.
“Sure,” I shrugged.
“After Earth is out,” Louis announced, once we were driving.
“After Earth...Oh! Is it that Science Fiction movie?” I asked. Louis nodded, smiling.
“Ok, cool,” I replied. The rest of the car ride was silent. I fidgeted uncomfortably, pulling on the hem of my dress. We pulled up to the movie theatre and Louis got out first and opened my door for me.
“Let us go!” Louis yelled. Just like at the fair, we skipped to the door, arms linked. We walked into the huge theatre and Louis walked up to the ticket booth.
“Two tickets to After Earth please,” Louis said. The ticket booth was being run by a girl about 19.
“Alright, sir. That’ll be 11.50,” The blonde said, “Do you have a rewards card with us?” She looked up and her eyes widened to see Louis.
“Oh. My. G-“ Louis slapped a hand over her mouth before she could finish.
“Please don’t,” Louis said quickly, while removing his hand. The blonde nodded in shock.
“You can swipe your card now, sir,” she said calmly. She looked at Louis and winked. I walked up and kissed Louis on the cheek.
“You ready, babe?” I asked him, emphasizing ‘babe.’ The girl shot me a look before we walked off.
“Just like at the fair, huh?” Louis laughed. I nodded. We went and bought a large popcorn and soda. We walked into the right theatre room and went all the way to the top and sat down in the middle of the row. Louis yawned and put his arm around me.
“Wow, you are cheesy,” I snorted. Louis grinned.
“Why thank you,” He said. 5 minutes later, the movie had started. It was actually really cool. I was a tomboy, kinda. The way I dress you can tell too. Avalon was somewhere in between a tomboy and a girly girl. I leaned my head on Louis’s shoulder and slipped into a light sleep.
“Boo!” A voice yelled. I jumped and ended up with popcorn on my head.
“Louis!” I yelled. Louis grinned.
“What? You’re the one who fell asleep!” He sassed. I sighed and dragged him out of the theatre room. We were walking out of the theatre, when Louis slipped his hand into mine. I looked down at our hands and smiled.
“Louis?” I asked softly. He looked at me expectantly.
“Yeah?”
“Thank you, I had a lot of fun tonight,” I smiled.
“You were asleep the whole time,” Louis said.
“Oh just shut it!” I grumbled. Louis laughed and unlocked his car. We got in and drove away. After we had been driving for a good 5 minutes, and hadn’t gotten closer to the hotel, I started to worry.
“Louis?” I asked.
“Yeah?”
“Where are we going?”
“Oh! To a lake, where I rented a little row boat,” He replied. My heart melted.
“That’s so romantic,” I said. Louis looked at me, an eyebrow raised.
“What? I AM a girl,” I snorted. We drove up to the lake and Louis helped me out. We walked down to it and he pushed the row boat into the water. He helped me get in. Louis got in and pushed us off with the paddle. I was gazing up at the stars, the wind gently blowing against my face. When suddenly Louis stood up, causing the boat to rock back and forth harshly.
“Louis! Sit down!” I yelled. He didn’t listen.
“Look! Look! A shooting star!” Louis yelled, jumping up and down. The boat tilted to its side.
“Louis Tomlinson! Sit your fat butt down now!” I screamed, oops, too late. And the boat tipped over. Spilling Louis and I into the pitch black lake. I swam over to the boat and tipped it right side up. Louis was stuck underneath. He swam out and climbed into the boat. Louis held out a hand and pulled me in.
“Wow, way to ruin the moment, Tomlinson,” I sassed.
“Shut up, it was a shooting star,” Louis mumbled. He rowed us back to the shore and we went to his car, dripping wet.
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“We’re back!” Louis sang/shouted at the top of his lungs. All heads turned towards us. Silence filled the room, but then Harry broke it by busting out laughing.
“What the crap happened to you two?!” Liam asked worried, typical.
“Long story short, we were in this row boat in a lake and then Louis stood up and started jumping up and down yelling, “Look! Look! It’s a shooting star!” And then we tipped over,” I shrugged. That caused another wave of laughter. I shook my head and headed to my room to change into something more comfortable. You try wearing heels almost 24/7!
Kinely's Sweats Avalon's Sweats
Avalon was sitting next to Niall with her iPhone out. I went and sat between Harry and Liam.
“Guys, I’m really tired,” I whined. And I rested my head on Harry’s shoulder and soon slipped off into a deep sleep…

Notes

Hey guys! So...who do you ship? Karry (Kinely + Harry) Or Linely (Kinely + Louis)? Please leave your vote below in the comments! Most couple with the most votes win! :) Please vote! Comment! And Subscribe! Going up to at least 30 chapters! Almost done! :)

Comments

Awwww this was a cute story!! <3 I love it!(:
OfficiallyBreee OfficiallyBreee
7/16/13
@Karina Tomlinson Thnx! I dont really like writing explict scenes tho...kinda awko taco. ;) I will try to update tomorrow...I am busy today. Sorry! :|
Hazza_Fan Hazza_Fan
7/15/13
Luv this chapter , hope that u can update soooon >
Erm, Clydehurst Christian Ranch. I am back now and am looking for a co author
Hazza_Fan Hazza_Fan
7/10/13
What camp??