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All Because of a Rose

Ditched


I was stirring the batter for sugar cookies when the lights decided to flicker off and then back on.

I decided to check the news to see if any weather warning was reported.

“Thank you Jason for the weather report this afternoon.

We will be back after the break.”


“Great, just great.” I thought to myself as I scooped up spoons of cookie dough into a pan.
After putting the tray into the oven, I decided to call my older sister, Celia, if she was alright on the road, since she was driving back from her boyfriend’s family’s house.

Waiting about five call rings, I left a voice message, and telling her to be safe.

After about thirteen minutes I could smell the cookies, meaning they were done and took them out of the oven to cool off.

As I took a fresh cookie off the tray to snack on while I watch some news about that day, I started to wonder where the heck Celia would be, because she was never out longer then she told me.

While I was about to take another bite of the cookie, I first saw the picture then the words flash up on the screen screeching:

BREAKING NEWS!

I dropped the cookie out of my shaking hands as I stared at my sisters picture on the screen, while the reporters talked about a girl’s body found in a ditch by the over flowed bridge.

“Sadly to say that we have found a girl who looks in her early twenties, found in a ditched with no signs of marks on her, dead.
She was found after a passing car found her car left on the other side of the road still in ignition.

After calling the cops to find an empty car, the cops found her on the other side of the road, with no heartbeat, at 8:43 p.m.


We have not found any identity of who she is and who her family possibly is.

If you have any idea who she is or if you are her family, please report to the East Cobbles Hospital.

Thank you, and sorry to anyone who knows her.”


I was too shocked to even leave my eyes off the screen, when all of a sudden my phone started to ring a tone that was only from my mother.I picked it up shakily and answered it with barely a whisper.

“Ohhh Rose!” I heard my mother cry.

“Mum, Ce- Cel- Celia.” I tried to make out.


“I know, I know baby girl. I just got the news, as we were going to go to sleep, but your father got this feeling he needed to check the news, and well, we…” I heard my mother starting to sniffle and heard my father in the other end of the phone pick it up and start talking to me.

“My baby girl, please stay strong, we will be coming home very soon. I just got an airplane ticket for your mother and me to travel down there tomorrow. I need you to go to the hospital and tell them you’re her sister and that her parents will be coming tomorrow.” I heard him say as I just nodded.

“You got that sweetie ?” he asked worryingly.


“Ye- yes dad.” I choked out as I started to get my car keys and shoes on.

“Okay, we will be back tomorrow to help you, drive safetly, bye sweetie.” he said assuredly.

“Bye dad.” I said softly as I got into my car and drove off to the hospital.

***

Notes

So ummm, I have decided to rewrite ABOAR because I love writing this story and I know you guys will love reading it... I'm sounding so assured right now. I lost my old account, Sarah_Tran because they decided to get rid of google accounts on here -_-

Comments

@mspippa
Not if you guys don't want me to.

RarwRaw RarwRaw
11/18/15

does this mean you'll stop posting here?

sailorscouts. sailorscouts.
11/17/15

@onedirectionsprincess6
Well thanks!! I really honestly appreciate it :)))
Always makes me want to start writing more after reading all these comments.

RarwRaw RarwRaw
10/29/15

I love this story, it gives me all the feels, your writing is amazing and the title is too haha :) it's perfectly planned and so awesome!

@RarwRaw
aw, you totally deserve the comments honey! i think you and your writing are wonderful. don't give up x

cocopops cocopops
10/17/15