Beauties? or Beasts? I ON HOLD! NEED TO DO A BIG EDIT I

I feel like such an idiot. I mean, exactly what kind of guy asks a girl out, sends her on basically a wild goose chase, and, while she's at it, blindfolds her?! Yeah I'm a little upset. But I didn't feel so bad after I took the blind fold off of Adagio. And as soon as I did, her face light up with excitement. She then took off her shoes and began walking down the dock. I had on my casual clothing under my tux, stupid as that is. After that was over, I began the walk down the long dock. When i got to where Adagio was, I noticed her smile wasn't there anymore. "Adagio? Are you alright?" I asked softly, trying not to scare her. "Y-yeah I I'm fine." She said weakly, turning her back to me staring down at the water. "Ya sure love? Cause it doesn't sound like it." I said. After a few seconds, I heard something hit the water. I knew exactly what it was. She was crying. "I-I'm fine okay?!" She said a little loud. "Sorry." She said. Before I could answer she asked, "N-Niall? Do you know who I am? About my past? About what a terrible person I am?" "Okay first off, I know a little bit about your past. Second, you are not a terrible person." I said, placing a hand on her shoulder. She turned her head slowly towards me, revealing her tear-stained face. "I just don't understand why someone like you would ask someone like me on a date. You know about what I've done, Niall so why would you be so nice to me knowing what I'm capable of? I just don't understand." She said crying even more. "Because I believe that everyone should be shown kindness. Regardless of whether or not they deserve it." I said, drying her tears. It was then that I saw her eyes. Everyone said that her eyes were dark, scary, some even said they were evil. But that's not what I saw. I saw her eyes were bright. Everyone said that her eyes were like and evil green. But they are actually bright blue. Full of kindness, passion, and love. I know that sounds weird but its true. We stared at each others eyes for who knows how long? After a little bit, she hugged me and whispered, "Thank you Niall. I needed to hear that" I hugged her back and said, "You're welcome. Anything for my girl." We hugged a little bit longer until she pulled away. "Niall? Can I trust you with something?" She asked. "Of course love." I said. She took my hand and we walked to the end of the dock and sat down, dangling our legs over the dock. "What is it?" I asked. "You have to promise not to tell anyone. And not just any regular promise. You have to Pinkie promise me." She said seriously. "Okay I promise." I said holding out my pinky finger. She laughed at that. "What?" I asked. "Not a PINKY promise! Pinkie Pie's promise!" What on earth is she talking about? "Huh?" "Like this; 'Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye'." She said showing me the moves to it. Its easy really. Make an X over your heart, then flap your hands up and down then put your hand over your eye as you say it. And so I did. I accidentally hit my self in the eye though. "Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my- Ow!" I said. She giggled at that. "Oh so you think that's funny huh?" I said a little bit upset. She shook her head no but was still laughing. "Alright! That is it missy!" I said. "Come here!" I said a little bit more upset. She screamed a little bit then ran back to the beach. I quickly followed after her. "Come here!" I said catching up to her. She looked behind and said, "Never!" I got closer and closer to her. Right as I was about to catch her, she ran even faster. I didn't give up though. I was running out of breath. So I started going slower. I couldn't take it. I stopped to catch my breath. I was bent over a little. "NIALL!" I heard Adagio scream. I looked up and saw her collapse. "ADAGIO!" I quickly ran after her. I finally got to where she was. "What's wrong?" I asked frantic. "It's...happening...again...I...can't...move." she said in and out of breaths. "Do you want me to call an ambulance?" I asked. She shook her head no. "My...inhaler...is...in...my...purse...please...go...get...it." she said. Before I could even think, I had her in my arms and was running towards the dock. I set her down on the dock and found her inhaler. She started hyperventilating really bad. I helped her sit up so she could use it. And she did. She was fine after a few seconds. I reached my hand out towards her. She took it and stood up. I put my arm around her waist and she laid her head on my shoulder. We sat down at the end of the dock like that and watched the sunset out on the sea. We looked at each other and we came closer until our eyes were just a few inches away. We came closer and closer. We were so clse together now that not even a piece of paper could fit between us. We were about to kiss when all of a sudden, SPLASH! I open my eyes and realize we were in the water. "LOUIS TOMLINSON! WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!" I yelled at him. "I thought you wanted to go for a swim!" He said, sounding like a little kid. I am so glad Adagio knows how to swim. I got up on the dock and slapped Louis on the arm. "Oowww!" He said like a little kid. He held out his hand for Adagio and she took it and pulled him in the water. She quickly got on the dock and started running away. "Adagio wait! Thanks a lot Lou!" I said angrily. I ran after Adagio. I didn't know where she went. But i knew I would find her.

Notes

Sorry I haven't updated in a while. Chapters are gonna be longer from now on. Please tell ms what you think. This is a different style of writing so please tell me what your honestly thinking.
~EquestrianViolinist434