
Adopted?
Chapter One Emma
I got in the car slowly. "What? We're not going to hurt you." I nodded. "Why did you adopt me?" They shrugged. "Cause we love you." I nodded again. We arrived at a mansion-yet-simple house. I gathered my stuff it was 9:00 by the time we got home. It was 5 when they got me. "nice house." "Thanks it's yours too." Liam said. We went inside and the wooden beams looked antique next to the modern day house. I got showed my room and unpacked.
That night, it was a full moon, I heard a crash downstairs then yelling. I raced downstairs near the basement door it had a slot in it I looked through the slot. I gasped, then screamed. I turned and ran outside, and pounding feet ran after me. I collapsed on the yard, uncontrollably sobbing. Louis was trying to comfort me. "Y-you guys a-are werew-wolves." I gasped he nodded. "We wont hurt you. Vampires are real too."
lovely story !
could you maybe, um... I dunno...
maybe make it a bit longer ??
toooo short
or just go more into detail with stuff, but awesome story you wrote here
11/1/15