Julie's Killer Coffee Shop
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“Any information about 12-year-old Julie Edwards yet?” asked the cop and Julie listened to them from behind the giant tree.
“No, she could be anywhere!” the cop punched his car.
“Stop, you’ll only hurt yourself. I know how much you loved the girl. She’s adorable but…nevermind that. Let’s leave,” spoke the first cop and they both got into the car. Julie came out of behind the tree and quickly ran towards the car. Her dress covered in blood, her face having tiny spots of red, and half her hair covered in the dark blood. She tried to catch up with the car but she couldn’t. She tried asking a lot of people for help but they were just too terrified. And that’s when dark Julie was born. Julie, the serial killer who was slow enough to torture her victims but quick enough to be never found.
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“PLEASE, LET ME GO! I DID NOTHING! PLEASE, DON’T KILL M-” But before the victim could finish, you could hear their scream and it was the scariest thing to be heard. The screaming noise always bothered everyone and when they searched for what had happened, they only found the body, covered in blood and only a knife in the chest. Julie always ran away instantly after she killed the victim and then went back working in her coffee shop.
“What happens at Julie’s Coffee Shop stays in her coffee shop,” say some.
Every time a victim when inside Julie’s Coffee Shop, they were never found anymore. The only time they were found was when Julie was done with them. And then, two more people made the same mistake. They walked into Julie’s coffee shop. Only this time, Julie had been more attracted to them. She wanted to torture them even more. More than she had tortured any of her other victims. The victims’ names: Harry Styles and Niall Horan.
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[June 25, 2015]
It was a normal day. Well, normal as it could get in the little town Julie lived in.
There were always killing going on and the criminal, Julie, never caught. And then, those innocent people making mistakes entering that coffee shop, they had no idea why Julie did that to her. They thought, maybe she’s got no motive. Maybe she’s just a crazy psycho serial killer. No one could understand her motive. But she did have a motive. She didn’t want to reveal it…yet. The police tried to find Julie but every time they entered her coffee shop, she would just act super innocent and the police would believe that the innocent, little Julie did nothing.
And then, the hugest mistake ever made. Harry Styles and Niall Horan, two guys that are rich and known for their kindness, decided to enter that shop.
“Hey, maybe we could find my favorite type of candy in here!” spoke Niall out of nowhere and Harry started laughing.
“What the heck? This isn’t the Sweet Candy Shop! We won’t find candy in here! This is something like Starbucks but less…crowded,” spoke Harry and Niall pouted.
“Now I’m starting to get why you’re not my friend!” spoke Niall and they entered the coffee shop.
“Hello, welcome to Julie’s Coffee Shop. What may I get you?” asked Julie and she smirked a little. “It’s hell for you now,” she whispered under her breath and Harry eyed her suspiciously.
“Do you have candy?” questioned Niall and Harry rolled his eyes.
“I already said, Niall. This isn’t the Sweet Candy Shop!” said Harry and Niall ignored him.
“No, we don’t. We have a special today. Two teas for three pounds,” spoke Julie and Harry gave Julie the money.
Julie went into the kitchen and took out her sleeping tablets. She crushed them and put two of them into the tea cups and poured the tea in the cup. After she put the tea cups on a tray, she took them outside and served them to Harry and Niall. She smirked as she walked back to the counter and instantly she heard a noise and she looked behind her. They were on the chair but they were knocked out. She dragged both of them downstairs into her basement and she smirked.
“This is gonna be fun.” Julie went back up to the coffee shop and closed the door, locked the windows, closed the shutters, and put the ‘Closed’ sign on the door. She went downstairs to the basement and closed the door behind her.
“No, she could be anywhere!” the cop punched his car.
“Stop, you’ll only hurt yourself. I know how much you loved the girl. She’s adorable but…nevermind that. Let’s leave,” spoke the first cop and they both got into the car. Julie came out of behind the tree and quickly ran towards the car. Her dress covered in blood, her face having tiny spots of red, and half her hair covered in the dark blood. She tried to catch up with the car but she couldn’t. She tried asking a lot of people for help but they were just too terrified. And that’s when dark Julie was born. Julie, the serial killer who was slow enough to torture her victims but quick enough to be never found.
~~~~~~~~~
“PLEASE, LET ME GO! I DID NOTHING! PLEASE, DON’T KILL M-” But before the victim could finish, you could hear their scream and it was the scariest thing to be heard. The screaming noise always bothered everyone and when they searched for what had happened, they only found the body, covered in blood and only a knife in the chest. Julie always ran away instantly after she killed the victim and then went back working in her coffee shop.
“What happens at Julie’s Coffee Shop stays in her coffee shop,” say some.
Every time a victim when inside Julie’s Coffee Shop, they were never found anymore. The only time they were found was when Julie was done with them. And then, two more people made the same mistake. They walked into Julie’s coffee shop. Only this time, Julie had been more attracted to them. She wanted to torture them even more. More than she had tortured any of her other victims. The victims’ names: Harry Styles and Niall Horan.
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[June 25, 2015]
It was a normal day. Well, normal as it could get in the little town Julie lived in.
There were always killing going on and the criminal, Julie, never caught. And then, those innocent people making mistakes entering that coffee shop, they had no idea why Julie did that to her. They thought, maybe she’s got no motive. Maybe she’s just a crazy psycho serial killer. No one could understand her motive. But she did have a motive. She didn’t want to reveal it…yet. The police tried to find Julie but every time they entered her coffee shop, she would just act super innocent and the police would believe that the innocent, little Julie did nothing.
And then, the hugest mistake ever made. Harry Styles and Niall Horan, two guys that are rich and known for their kindness, decided to enter that shop.
“Hey, maybe we could find my favorite type of candy in here!” spoke Niall out of nowhere and Harry started laughing.
“What the heck? This isn’t the Sweet Candy Shop! We won’t find candy in here! This is something like Starbucks but less…crowded,” spoke Harry and Niall pouted.
“Now I’m starting to get why you’re not my friend!” spoke Niall and they entered the coffee shop.
“Hello, welcome to Julie’s Coffee Shop. What may I get you?” asked Julie and she smirked a little. “It’s hell for you now,” she whispered under her breath and Harry eyed her suspiciously.
“Do you have candy?” questioned Niall and Harry rolled his eyes.
“I already said, Niall. This isn’t the Sweet Candy Shop!” said Harry and Niall ignored him.
“No, we don’t. We have a special today. Two teas for three pounds,” spoke Julie and Harry gave Julie the money.
Julie went into the kitchen and took out her sleeping tablets. She crushed them and put two of them into the tea cups and poured the tea in the cup. After she put the tea cups on a tray, she took them outside and served them to Harry and Niall. She smirked as she walked back to the counter and instantly she heard a noise and she looked behind her. They were on the chair but they were knocked out. She dragged both of them downstairs into her basement and she smirked.
“This is gonna be fun.” Julie went back up to the coffee shop and closed the door, locked the windows, closed the shutters, and put the ‘Closed’ sign on the door. She went downstairs to the basement and closed the door behind her.
Notes
Hope you loved the first chapter. I absolutely loved writing it. This is my first "dark" book so give me a break. xP Soundtrack will be revealed soon.
<3 Hana
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"Also, don't forget to check out my shop. We could have so much fun...it'll be like hell."
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Hey are you guys still updating, I really love your story
1/27/16