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Beneath The Lies

Scar (Chapter 6)

Scar: (Nouns) A mark left on the skin or within the body tissue where a wound, burn or sore has not healed completely.

(Raisa's P.O.V)


The first thing that catches my eyes was the scar that damaged his left eyebrow. It doesn’t look like a newly cut wound but in fact it seems like it was from a long time ago. His body was covered in ink, up to the point where it reaches his neck and his face is the only area that doesn’t have any tattoos from what I can see.

His gaze was strong and intense, observing me as my eyes moved around looking at his features. He is well-built just like Zayn and also seems to be around the same height.

“Louis Tomlinson,” he introduced himself while holding out his hand for me to shake. Pretending to be not intimidated by him I shook his hand with a smile on my face. “Rai…Umm (clear throat making it go deeper) Ray Adams,” I told him. “I also want to thank you for before,” I continued. “You are my bunk buddy…better keep you out of trouble,” he said without any emotions.

“Umm yeah about that…I am sorry, there wasn’t any more beds left,” I tried to explain so that he won’t think the wrong thing of me. From what I’ve heard in the cabin, I want to be on Louis good list instead of his bad ones because I don’t want to know what he is capable of doing.

“We are at war…not in a luxury home…there is nothing to apologize about,” he replied humbly and tried to walk off. “Where are you going?” I asked trying to follow him. “It is lunch time,” he answered as a matter of fact way. We didn’t say another word as we made our way to dining block, as we got closer I could hear murmuring, laughing and spoon clanking that echoed throw-out the building.

Louis opened the door and walked in. I followed him not far behind and the sounds that was echoing before has now become a complete silent. What is this? Why was everyone so terrified of Louis Tomlinson? Yes! He does look intimidating but he actually seems like a very humble person.

Everyone’s eyes were burning on us as Louis made his way to an empty table in the corner of the dining room. Without him realizing, I went and took a seat on the same table as he was because I didn’t know anyone and he was practically the only person I’ve talked to the most.

“Aren’t you scared of me?” he asked while looking at me sceptically. I was very surprised by his upfront question and to be honest I haven’t known him long enough to make judgements. “I don’t like lying soo…personally no! I am actually not scared of you…I don’t know you long enough to make judgement on whether you scare me or not…as for now, I have no reasons to be scared of you,” I stated truthfully and I can see a slight smile forming on his face.

“So you literally have no idea who I am?” he asked curiously. “Nope! I have no clue…why? Should I have heard of you or something? Are you like a famous person that I don’t know about or something?” I smiled at him and he chuckled in response.

“You could say I am famous in a way…but not in the way you think,” he answered. “Should I be worried? “ I questioned seriously. His words sort of just clarify the murmuring that people are going on about. He must have done something bad, really bad to the point where every guy in this infantry knows about him except me.

What did he do that is so bad that everyone is scared of him? I mean he doesn’t even look that old, he is probably in his early twenties as well. “If you stay on my good side then no…you have nothing to worry about,” he smiled smugly at me. I haven’t even notice how much he has been smiling at this point…at first I thought he is not capable of having human emotions.

“Just when I thought you can’t smile…”I muttered to myself, “I thought you are those grumpy people who never smiles you know? But hey you proved me wrong….big time.” He laughed slightly at my confession. “I like your honesty…I thought your brother was talking bullshit when he talks highly of you…but hey you proved me wrong as well,” he winked.

What? He knows my brother? “H-How do y-you know my b-brother?” I shattered, now a wave of fear has taken over me.

“I know more than you think Raisa…your secret is safe with me.”


Notes

Sorry for another short Chapter but hopefully the next chapter will make it up for it :) What do you guys think of Louis so far? How do you guys think he knows Raisa's brother? Yet her secret?

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Comments

@julietrainier7

Hahaha awesome :) Thanks....I know it's a slow start....but things will happen evantually ^_^

Just like I promised, I checked it out. Very good! Can't wait to see what happens!

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5/26/15

@blossom.

Aww thank you soo much. You don't know how much your words made me smile :) xx

I think you've done amazing with this story. Just like all your others xo

@skyfall

Aww thank you love :) I hope it is o.k...I mean I am not very good at English in general :)