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chapter 2

Cadyn's POV

is this actually happening? am i standing in a room with a man who ive thought for most of my life was dead? why is he here now? all i can say for certain is that the boys all 5 of them are alive. "what happened?" i ask. "well you see alot actually happened." the girl says. "you were placed under a voodoo hoodoo trance. meaning as soon as you stepped over the threshhold at the asylum the 6 of you were out cold. we placed you in the trance involuntarily of course. meaning what happened in the trance hasnt happened... yet that is." she says. "you see baby girl, i was never dead. your mother didnt want you around me and for reasons im not sure of. "so why are we here and why are we chained to beds. i want to see them." i say trying to pull on the chains. she walks over and slaps me hard in the face making me stop my frantic movements.

"the only reason that you awoke from the trance is because one significant death happened that made you snap out of it. now whose death was that? all the other boys awoke as they died and since harry is the only one still under his death wouldnt have been the one to bring you out. so i wonder how and when he will wake." she says. "how do you know this sick shit?" i ask through gritted teeth. "my family practice voodoo. we even own a shop. plus its new orleans babae." she states proudly. "we will allow you to see them in time, but first we must move you to another area. all of you." my 'dad' says. he moves closer undoing the chains and sits me up and chains them behind my back. he guides me out of a room and sits me in a chair. after a few minutes he brings each of the boys in and as we look at each other and ask if each other is ok.

i notice when liam is brought in his face is drained of color. i know its because he has just realized that its my dad. liam makes eye contact with me and whispers if im ok. i nod yes as hes sat beside me. as zayn niall and louis sit waves of emotion run through me as i remember the trance and watching them die. last to be brought in is harry and he is sat on the other side of me. The girl walks over to me and i see harrys eyes go huge as if hes seen a ghost. "tris" he whispers and its barely audible. she lets out a laugh and says "miss me?"

Notes

Comments

@JustBloo.
glad you like it. i changed the whole ending. should only be a few more chapters. what you think or should i keep it going?

gibbskel gibbskel
2/2/16

Whoa!! What. Just. Happened?! Lol That was GREAT!

JustBloo. JustBloo.
2/1/16

@onedirectionsprincess6
well thank you. even i was a bit creeped out, plus if a story doesnt give you any kind of emotion how will you know if its that good. i cried to and i wrote the thing haha. thank you.

gibbskel gibbskel
11/3/15

this story is awesome! i actually cried at some point haha, it gives me all the feels, and i was reading it last night, and felt actually kind of creeped out haha :)

@gibbskel
Yay for hell breaking loose! Can't wait :)

JustBloo. JustBloo.
7/1/15