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One

I'm sick of sitting in the bus when there's so much we could be doing. This is the worst part of being related to someone famous. "cadyn?" Liam calls as he comes to the back where I'm watching tv with Louis and zayn. "What" I yell back. "We're going somewhere tonight. Get dressed something comfy." He says smiling knowing I'm dieing to get out of here. Ahh I love my cousin.

"Oh hell yea" I yell and run to get changed. I hear the boys laughing as I run to my space. I just throw on some jeans and a tee. "Ready" I yell as all 5 come out. "Where we goin" I ask. "Dunno mike was behind this." Liam says shrugging. "Mike as in Harry's friend?the creepy guy who stares at me all the time?" I ask looking at harry who rolls his eyes. "He just takes interest in beautiful things." Harry says winking and walking past me. Seriously? We get Into the big ass rental and head to meet this perv.

We we pull up to a very creepy building. And see a few people standing waiting for us. "Welcome guys. We're going on a scavenger hunt." Mike says. "In there" Niall asks. "Yeah it's an old asylum. We do this all the time don't worry." He says. I get chills all over my body. I'm not normally scared of this stuff but something seems off. "Guys this isn't a good idea. I have a bad feeling." I say grabbing zayn and Harry's shirts. "I'll stay with you." Harry says leaning in to whisper in me eye. "Don't be scared babe." He says and puts his arm over my shoulder as zayn takes my hand.

"I'm serious" I yell making them stop at my sudden outburst. "Something's not right with this. We don't know these people. It seems off" I continue. They ignore me and pull me in the direction of the door whilst I'm shaking like a damn chihuahua. As soon as we step in I feel my whole body get cold. There's grafitti all over the walls and dirt and grass and shit all over the floor.

This is exactly where I wanna be. An abandoned asylum in New Orleans with dodgy people. Great

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Comments

@JustBloo.
glad you like it. i changed the whole ending. should only be a few more chapters. what you think or should i keep it going?

gibbskel gibbskel
2/2/16

Whoa!! What. Just. Happened?! Lol That was GREAT!

JustBloo. JustBloo.
2/1/16

@onedirectionsprincess6
well thank you. even i was a bit creeped out, plus if a story doesnt give you any kind of emotion how will you know if its that good. i cried to and i wrote the thing haha. thank you.

gibbskel gibbskel
11/3/15

this story is awesome! i actually cried at some point haha, it gives me all the feels, and i was reading it last night, and felt actually kind of creeped out haha :)

@gibbskel
Yay for hell breaking loose! Can't wait :)

JustBloo. JustBloo.
7/1/15