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You Are My Eyes (Haven't been edited)

Last year (Chapter 1)

“Ivanna Jones, for the one hundredth time…you have to wake up,” my aunty yelled banging on my bedroom door. I have lived with her ever since the accident and I know for a fact that she doesn’t want me here. She doesn’t have any children of her own because she clearly cannot stand them.

“Young lady, this is your first day of school…you certainly don’t want to be late,” she continued, “yeah I am up Aunty Loren… going to be ready in 15 minute,” I replied.

I know my ways around the house off by heart, despite the fact that I can’t see, I can sense things, objects or even human when they are near me and I can identify what it is or what they are by its presence or sound.

I was born this way, being the lucky person I am, I don’t need walking/blind sticks because even though my eyes cannot see my brain detect things just like a normal human being.

I cannot see because my eyes have been misplaced in my heart.

I am not the richest person, my dad used to work in a chicken farm while my mum used to work as a laundry lady. My parents promised me that they would find the best doctor to make me able to see again on my 18th birthday, I never expected too much from my parents and I know they both work extremely hard to just able to put meals on my plate daily.

They both work days and nights to able to provide for my educations, I don’t know what more I can ask for. I could say my parents are one of the best parents in the world, I am one of the luckiest girls there is because I am not capable of doing anything…I have always been useless and will always will.

Everything was great despite our living condition, until the accident that flipped my life upside down.

** (School) **

“Take a seat and the principal will talk to you in a minute,” a lady said which I assume one of the administration lady here, her tone sounded soft and sweet.

She seems like a sweet lady.

“I will do all the talking once we are inside,” my Aunty informs me and I nodded my head to show her that I am actually listening. “Ahhh you must be Miss Jones, please come in,” a deep friendly male voice made me turn my head towards the sound, I could detect some sort of an accent, “I am Kevin Styles and it’s wonderful to have you be part of our school,” he greeted.

Yep! A British accent…

My Aunty and I both walk into the office taking out seat in front of his desk. “We have never given the opportunity to work with such unique student like you before and we are all very honored to have you here,” he said proudly, with not even a slight tone of judgements.

He makes it sound like as if I am a trophy that this school just have won or something. I mean, no not a lot of people like to have blind people that their school because it consists of extra work.

“No! Thank you…for accepting her at your school, we are very grateful,” my aunty replied sweetly. “O.k. Ivanna, let’s go get your time table dear and you certainly don’t want to be late for your first class,” she continued with a smile on her face.

Wow, she can speak sweetly? That's her first...I thought she could only yell and scream.

(Harry’s P.O.V)

“Harry you are a dick you know that? I mean who tell people to give then a head in the middle of the hall way at a party? That is just wrong,” Niall said in disgust, which made me laugh, “I didn’t want to…she was just all over me…so yeah…you can’t leave a girl hanging,” I defended myself. I am right, Shelly or Sally, whatever her name was really desperate for me, so might as well fuck her mouth.

“Still it doesn’t make it any less…,” Niall was cut out by Mr Mill, “good morning class, excited for your last year of high school?” no one really answered him or pay attention to him, “that’s what I thought and I am sure…”a knock on the door interrupted Mr Mill’s speech.

“Holy shit,” Niall whispered as the door open revealing a girl with wavy dark blond hair that reaches up to waist length walks into the room. “Hazz she is HOT,” Niall exclaimed while eying every movement that the girl made.

She is about average height, without a doubt this girl is hot, with her nice features and her curves. All the guys in the class pretty much already drooling all over her, she sure outshine all the girls at this school. She isn’t wearing anything slutty or anything, plain bottom up shirt with its sleeves rolled up and a plain skinny jean,granny clothes really, yet she makes them look good on her. But she seems way too innocent for my likings.

She is talking to Mr Mill about something which I can’t hear from the back of the room and Mr Mill smiles at whatever they are blabbing about. All the seats are pretty much taken except for the ones on my right and I guess she will have to sit next to me them.

They’ve been talking like what half an hour now? Geez… its does not take that long for meet and greet.

From what it seems like eternity, the conversation between the two come to an end with Mr Mill asking her something and she shook her head in reply. She turns to walk towards me, which I assume to take the neat next to me and for the first time she looked up.

Oh my fucking God… Am I seeing things? I have never seen anyone’s eyes like that before…

Blue, grey and white, I don’t even know which dominant which color because there are all there. They mixed together making her eyes very unique and it sparkles from the shining light from the outside. Her eyes alone are already making my big fellow hard, boy this girl is really making me turn on…hard.

“Talk about drooling,” Niall punched my arm snapping me out of my gaze. I didn’t even notice I was staring and it seems like she didn’t notice I was staring either. Heck, she actually didn’t notice any of the stars that was given her way, well not only innocent but also seem to be naive too.

She took the seat next to me without a word or giving me any glances at all. She took out the general school stationary along with a voice recorder?Personal scanner? (A/n: Pretend the scanner can do a voice over of whatever it is scanning , so basically, if you scan a book the scanner will read you the book out loud)

What the hell? Why would she need all of this for? O.k. she is hot and everything but fuck...she is weird…I knew it, she was too innocent, too naive and too weird for my likings.


Notes

Hey guys, I hope you will give me a chance of this story <3<3

Please subscribe, vote and give me feedback because I only want to improve <3

Lots of love P.S xxx


Comments

Please update :)

Teresa Horan Teresa Horan
6/20/16

@JustBloo.

See......we need more people like you in this world <3 <3 Yes!!!! you were very helpful and I messaged you with the biggest spoiler everrrrrr ^_^

@PS2Live the dream


Was I helpful? I have a problem conveying my thoughts into understandable sentences lol But what can I say? I'm just a fanfic reading girl willing to do anything to see her otp continue their story ;)

JustBloo. JustBloo.
12/11/15

@JustBloo

DO you know how much LOVE I have for you?? If you don't......well.....I LOVE YOU dear <3 <3

Hey!

I had this same thing happen to me too! Weirdness! But anyways...

I honestly think that this story has so far been written wonderfully. If there wasn't a plot or designated outcome, I sure as hell couldn't tell. But I know sometimes lack of "structure" puts a strain on the author just because of writer's block and other things like that.

I think from here, you can look at what you've written so far and ask yourself possible ways you can go next and sketch out and organize the rest of the story from this part (sometimes brainstorming concepts with someone else really makes the process easier and in some cases cleaner), and then go back to previous chapters and tweak certain things just so it' ll all wrap up nicely.

OR....

You can rewrite it (as you previously stated) and do things differently. The only problem that may arise with that, is since you are so far along in this story (40 chapters) the people that have previously subscribed to your story and have followed it this far may have trouble getting used to a new storyline and character adjustments.

But that's assuming there was a story line before (which it has seemed like), which you said there wasn't. So it's definitely a hard choice.

I think you should trust your gut and do what seems best to you. Everyone else will get over it :)

I'm here if you need a brainstorm session or a convo just to sketch out storylines by the way.

Ivarry shipper for life lolol


JustBloo. JustBloo.
12/10/15