Disoreinted Desires
By: AbyKay562

On a note entirely different from this review: WHY THE HELL ARE MY LETTERS COMING OUT LIKE A FUCKING RAINBOW?!? Did anyone give them permission to be purple....eh no! Anyways.....

To anyone asking why I keep reviewing Aby's stories, the amswer is this: She is just that good of a writer that everyone
of her stories deserves it's own review.

For this story, I bit my hand and refused to type into the comment section the message of, " GAHHHHHHHH NOOOOOO I LOVE THIS UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOMEONE HELP ME LAWD!!!" Because I wanted this review to be a surprise.

Do you know how hard that was for me?!?

This is by far Aby's best peice of work. I'm sorry all of you firm believers in Persecute or Dedicated Love, because this is one of those stories that needs to be published and be number one on the popular page.

I cried. On chapter two. Gosh I need a life, I proabably shouldn't even sat that out loud but I cried. Harry's character makes my heart cry. And when Louis got angry (read to see what he does), I was in hysterics. I just want to grab Harry up and squeeze the fucking shit outta him. All of them actually.. .

Like Aby, you're writing in this story (the descriptions and plot development, and the frame of the story) is amazing. It almost makes me cry all over again. You need to understand how good this story is. I genuinely mean it this is outstanding. I am about to pull out my Thesauraus because I need words for you.

This story is my new favorite on this site and by far my favorite recommendation. You don't even understand how 100% serious I am. You. Are. Amazing. Period.

I have so much I want to say to you, I wish I were living this story (well maybe just in it to comfort your characters), but I am because the writing teleports me almost to this world. And I can't even believe how I am feeling because no other story has EVER made me feel this way.

And I am probably just saying the same things over again, but it is only because my brain is spinning at how well of an author you've become over the course of the time I have been on this website.

I wish I could recommend this a thousand times or give you a thousand views because this deserves all of them. It is SO GOOD.

Damn, this is a long ass update....

People, Do It For Aby. And yourselves of course......

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