Grammar- No mistakes as far as I could tell. Good job on that!

Plot line- Omg I love this story already! It's so interesting and grabbed my attention right away. You are such an amazing writer, literally! You give detail, and I've never seen such a unique story line. Storm is so different from other characters. She's this edgy girl while Harry's known as the teen heartthrob, pretty boy. Please don't stop writing this!

Summary- The summary was good; short but effective.

Cover- The covers sort of boring and hard to tell what the image is. But I know you just started on this story so you have plenty of time to jazz up the cover photo, or have another user on the website make you one if you are not able to.

Characters- I love the characters and the buildup. They're so interesting and different from other characters in stories. Props for changing things up.

What should be changed or fixed- Nothing. I truly like this story and how it is unfolding. I'm so excited to see what will happen between Storm and Harry.

Overall rating- I haven't read enough to give your story a solid rating, but so far I'm enjoying it. Keep up the hard work; the effort you're putting into this story will definitely pay off.

Notes

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