Reviews
Save Me From Myself
Here's my review for your story :)
You have a lot of Grammar mistakes. The plot is good but it would be amazing if you would be more descriptive. Your lacking in writing for the POV'S. Charlie's and Luke's relationship is progressing to fast.
I actually love the story plot its amazing,but it would be more amazing if you would be more descriptive with your writing. :)
Dont delete the story I can see a bright future for the story. If you add more emotion to it. Like for Charlie's POV the readers want to feel her grief and sadness. And for Luke's and Ashton's the readers want to feel their emotions also.
Plot 8/10
Characters 9/10
Overall 7.5/10
Improvements for your story
1) Grammar
2)Descriptive
3)Creativity
4) You want to be different from other stories similar like yours
Sorry if I sounded like a Bitch. I want your story to be successful :) <3
Hey there love, it would mean the world to me if you could do a review on my story call, "Contrast between you and I." Thanks heaps lovely xxx
4/30/15