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Hi this is my review for Hero :)

Its written beautifully :)
The plot is amazing actually. I really enjoyed reading the story. I like chapter 2 because how it goes in depth when Abriella woke up and it replayed the scene when April POV left off. There is barely any Grammar mistakes in the chapters. Oh I loved it when Niall cuffed April to the bed the suspense is real. Thats good that you didn't make it to fast.

Characters 10/10

Plot 9/10


Overall its a 10/10

Improvements for the story

1) Make it different from the other stories similar like yours
2) Spacing for chapter 2 make it together.
3) Be a tad bit more descriptive of their POV'S


But im in love :) <3

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