Reviews
Labyrith
Hi here's my review for Labyrith.
Its a different fanfic from others but its very interesting. When they play the game you should put a notice that there in the game. Because when I was reading I was confused. But overall the story spacing is excellent. You rarely have any Grammar mistakes. Beautifully written actually I actually love this story how different it is from others. Your great at being descriptive. I love the character Archer she seems like she's awesome to hang out with. Plot 8/10
Improvements in story
1) Shorten the update just a little
And thats pretty much it :)
You should actually be a editor :)
Hey there love, it would mean the world to me if you could do a review on my story call, "Contrast between you and I." Thanks heaps lovely xxx
4/30/15