Reviews
Summer Love
First Impression
I'm in love with it actually :) <3 You have Grammar mistakes in some of your chapters and make sure you space some wording out. So it can be clear for the readers. And with Anita and Harry you really don't want to push their relationship to fast because they just met. But overall your story plot is amazing :)
Characters I love them
Improving your story
1) Maybe hiring a editor
2) Fixing your Grammar and add commas
3) Don't rush things to fast with your characters
4) More emotion
But I really love the idea of the story
9/10 :)
Sorry if I sounded like a BITCH
Hey there love, it would mean the world to me if you could do a review on my story call, "Contrast between you and I." Thanks heaps lovely xxx
4/30/15