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~A Bit of Everything!

Review 1!

(I hope I spelled your username right.)

TITLE: French Kiss
AUTHOR:
Call_Me_Godot
COVER
It's simple, yes, but I like it anyway!
PLOT I love your plot! It's one of my favorite ideas (Yes, I have seen web-penpal, [webpal, whatever] fanfictions before) but great none the less.
GRAMMAR/SPELLING From what I've read, your spelling is great, although when your characters are talking you kind of cut it off, ex. (Of course, this isn't a real convo, but for example) "Hello, I'm Cece" "Nice to meet you Cece" I said. "Welcome to our school." When it should be, "Hello, I'm Cece." "Nice to meet you, Cece," I said. "Welcome to our school." But, of course, that could be my mild OCD getting in the way.
OVERALL RATING 7.5/10
OTHER COMMENTS Your paragraphs are a bit short, but interesting. (Are you by anyway French or is Google Translate your friend? :P)

**I don't know if I'm all that good with reviews, but I hope this gave you a kind of summary. :)

Notes

Comments

@Niall's.Princess

LOL, I agree. Have a bit of an actual person (not some robot) in ur book, y'know?! :p

omg, i hate when authors dont ever make the girls have periods, my characters do though! And also, when the girl gets pregnant for the first time ITS ALWAYS A GIRL. wtf?! Whats the matter with a bby boy???

@Call_Me_Godot

Haha. I wish I could subscribe to your story, but unfortunately I don't have an account on that website. I'm still going to stalk it, though :3

nikkiwasnthere nikkiwasnthere
3/25/15

@nikkiwasnthere
Thank you so much :3 I took a bit of French, Latin, and Spanish so I try to use what I can remember since Google isn't all too trustworthy >.>

@Call_Me_Godot

Done! :)

nikkiwasnthere nikkiwasnthere
3/25/15