
~A Bit of Everything!
Review 1!
(I hope I spelled your username right.)
TITLE: French Kiss
AUTHOR: Call_Me_Godot
COVER It's simple, yes, but I like it anyway!
PLOT I love your plot! It's one of my favorite ideas (Yes, I have seen web-penpal, [webpal, whatever] fanfictions before) but great none the less.
GRAMMAR/SPELLING From what I've read, your spelling is great, although when your characters are talking you kind of cut it off, ex. (Of course, this isn't a real convo, but for example) "Hello, I'm Cece" "Nice to meet you Cece" I said. "Welcome to our school." When it should be, "Hello, I'm Cece." "Nice to meet you, Cece," I said. "Welcome to our school." But, of course, that could be my mild OCD getting in the way.
OVERALL RATING 7.5/10
OTHER COMMENTS Your paragraphs are a bit short, but interesting. (Are you by anyway French or is Google Translate your friend? :P)
**I don't know if I'm all that good with reviews, but I hope this gave you a kind of summary. :)
@Niall's.Princess
LOL, I agree. Have a bit of an actual person (not some robot) in ur book, y'know?! :p
5/7/15