
{Tips For Fanfics}
Details D;
Details! My worst enemy! Ughh, I suck at detailing. That doesn't mean that I can't give you tips.
Okay no one wants to read a story without detail. Detail is what readers like, so they can visualize. Most of you could be pretty damn good at detail, unless your me.
Without Detail: Harry stood there staring into my eyes with his eyes.
BORING!
With Detail: Harry stood there against the white wall, his foot up against it and the other one on the pavement. His beautiful green eyes staring into my light blue eyes.
BOOM! I JUST MADE A DIFFRENCE!
Notes
Heyy, I hope my advice helped, comment below on some things you need advice on.
~Mona
Its OK,I figured it out
Thanks..
2/29/16