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Well, you read the title, if you didn't. Read it!

Okay, so... im going to make a sad scenario with and without detail.

Without detail:

I walked in and saw her body on the floor, there was a note by her that said, :"I'm sorry."

With detail

I walked into her bedroom, I saw her body on the floor, her arms covered in cuts and tears stained on her cheeks. There was a note by her, that said, "Im sorry."

Notes

Difference?