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Starting a Spark

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•HARRY•

I can't stop staring at her she is so beautiful her hair,skin,eyes,nose,body,& the way she is sweet yet bad and mysterious from the moment I saw her outside her house with her brother , I knew this girl was going to be the death of me . Put a girl that sweet cannever love a monster like me . Sadly I Love Her Madly . I only have three classes with her History,Biology,and Gym.

•PEIGHT•

We were now in gym about to soccer “OKAY HUDLE UP NOW Am about to tell you team leaders my two best players Styles and Cardoziano” he yells and harry smirks at me this should be fun

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THIS MEGA IMPORTANT GOOGLE WONT LET ME IN MY ACCOUNT SO I WILL CONTINUE MY STORIES THROUGH THIS ACCOUNT

Thinking about us
4/25/15

Wow thank you 10.0 lour you guys .I love my FANS

Thinkingabout you
3/14/15

@Corrina Tomlinson
Thanks all try to use more commas then.

Thinkingabout you
3/10/15

I like it, keep writing it's just when I was reading the characters I got confused but then I realized it so, and I don't mean to be rude, but you should use commas. They're very important other than that great story