Cover: 6/10

Plot: Interesting, on the first chapter. That should be your summary. Maybe the summary the description. Im going to be honest, Luke is only like 17 in the book, right? If he is only 17 then he shouldn't have tons of tattoos. Because that's against the law, well at least where I am from. If Abbie hates men, wouldn't that mean she's a lesbian?

Spelling & Grammar: 6/10 There was quite a lot of spelling mistakes. Suggestion for grammar, read it out loud.

My Personal Opinion: I don't like it that much, I'm sorry.. it's nothing about you, the plot doesn't interest me. It's same old same old. Girl gets abused by parent, they meet some guy and fall in love. Keep writing cause I saw you have 15 subscribers, that's pretty damn good.

If I Voted or Subscribed or both: I voted.

Notes

Sorry, I'm a bitch. I apologize for my review for your story.

~Mona


MAYBE BECAUSE HIS HAIR IS BLACK AND BLUE :0