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The first thing I noticed was the title. It's intriguing, it's mysterious, but it is spelt wrong. I think what you meant to spell was psycho, meaning crazy, but if you said the title aloud, it'd be fisco. I don't know if you meant to spell it that way, or it was by mistake, so I'm slightly confused on that part.

I liked the blurb and the summary. Short and to the point. It attracts my attention in a good way. You still misspelt psycho in them, but, that's understandable.

Overall, this would be a 9. Although it's misspelt, in my mind, it adds something to the story. I want to read more to find out why is it spelt that way. Is it just by mistake, or is it a word they created. From the blurb, I feel that it is just misspelt, but I can't be certain.

For the characters, I don't know what the girl's name is. In the character box, it says she is Erica Lowe, as Sasha, and I think that it implies the picture is Erica Lowe, playing Sasha. Can you clear that up?

Since there is only two chapters, there isn't much else I can say about the characters, and since there isn't that much to know about them yet, I feel that it would be unfair to judge them.

For the plot, I think things aren't lining up. The first day of school, and she skips with the guy who was meant to be helping her out? The reason Harry was chosen to pick her was most likely that he was a good-two shoes. I mean, why let a troublemaker help a new student? From a teacher's view, that's asking for problems. And since he is a goody-two shoes, why would he skip? Also, it's her first day. Wouldn't the teachers know, and be on the look out for her? If she skipped on the first day of school, wouldn't the notice?

The second chapter was great. It was mind-blowing awesome. I think that if this is the future of the story, it's sure to be awesome.

The plot is 8. I haven't read a story quite like this. It's not a story with a typical confusing Harry, it seems to be a bit paranormal.

Overall, I really liked the story, I subscribed, and hope you will continue writing! The story is an 8.5, but I think if the title is cleared up, it'd be a 9.

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