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Dying

I can feel my crush dying...
He can hate me, love me, curse me, bless me, whatever
I don't care...

The scary thing isn't me letting go...
it's how much thinking space it's opened up...
I prided myself on my independence...
but if hours of my day were devoted to him...
can I really call myself independent?
It's scary that my mind isn't mine when I like someone...
I wouldn't mind devoting it to him...
I devote myself to him...
that's why it's got to stop.

I can feel it withering...
He makes my world turn...
the sun that it revolves around.
Now it is gone...
and I'm scared...
He looks at me with his eyes...
and I'm in love.
But it has to die.
It's dead.
It's nonexistent.
Dead.

But then,
what I can I do
without him?

Notes

And my inner sissie is unleashed

Comments

I'm not too sure if you're still doing this but if you are, could you review my story 'The Donation'? Thank you

abygail.bauman abygail.bauman
4/22/18

Hey there lovely, it would mean the world to me if you could do a review on my new story "Contrast between you and me." I have only written two chapters and I was wondering if it was worth to continue. Thanks love xxx

PS2Live the dream PS2Live the dream
4/30/15

Could you review my story, it's called supernatural, please :3

Malik'sLover Malik'sLover
4/27/15

@Sodapop
Don't worry, take all the time you need. I was just looking for a way to get my story a bit noticed and getting reviews and critiques seemed like a good start. I am glad that you liked Brontide so far!

Escapist Escapist
4/4/15

@Escapist

It might be obvious that I haven't been updating lately, but I read your story and like it so far! I am really busy right now, but soon I'll be able to post all the reviews! I am actually planning to do a massive updating session today or Monday, and yeah :) I feel guilty for not updating...

Sodapop Sodapop
4/4/15
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