Poems, Books, and Reviews
Ink
Ink
yellowdiamonds and xXKaleighStyles57Xx
First off, your blurb (the summary below the cover, before you reach the full summary) was amazing. It just gave me the feels. The Taylor Swift I Knew You Were Trouble reference just popped out to me. I am a huge Swiftie, along with a moderate fan of One Direction. It was amazing to read a story with a mention of Taylor that didn't jump down her throat of being terrible. This is my favorite part of the cover-blurb-summary thing.
Then, your cover itself. The The Fault in Our Stars quotes on it were amazing, to put it lightly, along with the graphics. They matched each other perfectly, and kind of set the mood for the story.
The summary. It was great. While some may argue it was too short, it served its purpose. It had a hook, which makes the reader want to continue. There was something about it that just made me happy, if that makes any sense.
In all, the advertising part is definitely a 10. It was amazing, I couldn't find a single flaw.
Characters:
I like how you used quotes, and stuff like that for the characters. It gave the story a mysterious edge to it, that was surprising and effective. The only thing is that it makes it harder to judge the consistency of the characters.
From what I could tell, the story has consistent characters. I would rate this a 10.
Word Choice
I like the word choice, and how it keeps the mood. You don't use complicated words we need to use a dictionary for, and yet they are sophisticated and well chosen. Again, this is a ten.
Thoughts in General:
I loved the story. You are an amazing author and it clearly shows in your writing. I will recommend it to all of my friends, subscribe, vote, everything. I loved it. The plot was so good, any of the flaws the story might have had could be overlooked. It isn't the most original plot line, of a girl who tries to not fall in love with Harry, but probably will. However, it is one of the few actually decent ones, and is refreshing for a change. Not much else to say, except you two are amazing, and I LOVE your poems. You shouldn't stop writing.
yellowdiamonds and xXKaleighStyles57Xx
First off, your blurb (the summary below the cover, before you reach the full summary) was amazing. It just gave me the feels. The Taylor Swift I Knew You Were Trouble reference just popped out to me. I am a huge Swiftie, along with a moderate fan of One Direction. It was amazing to read a story with a mention of Taylor that didn't jump down her throat of being terrible. This is my favorite part of the cover-blurb-summary thing.
Then, your cover itself. The The Fault in Our Stars quotes on it were amazing, to put it lightly, along with the graphics. They matched each other perfectly, and kind of set the mood for the story.
The summary. It was great. While some may argue it was too short, it served its purpose. It had a hook, which makes the reader want to continue. There was something about it that just made me happy, if that makes any sense.
In all, the advertising part is definitely a 10. It was amazing, I couldn't find a single flaw.
Characters:
I like how you used quotes, and stuff like that for the characters. It gave the story a mysterious edge to it, that was surprising and effective. The only thing is that it makes it harder to judge the consistency of the characters.
From what I could tell, the story has consistent characters. I would rate this a 10.
Word Choice
I like the word choice, and how it keeps the mood. You don't use complicated words we need to use a dictionary for, and yet they are sophisticated and well chosen. Again, this is a ten.
Thoughts in General:
I loved the story. You are an amazing author and it clearly shows in your writing. I will recommend it to all of my friends, subscribe, vote, everything. I loved it. The plot was so good, any of the flaws the story might have had could be overlooked. It isn't the most original plot line, of a girl who tries to not fall in love with Harry, but probably will. However, it is one of the few actually decent ones, and is refreshing for a change. Not much else to say, except you two are amazing, and I LOVE your poems. You shouldn't stop writing.
Notes
This came out gushy, but, this is often what good writers do to me -_- anyways, I hope you liked your review, and I didn't seem like I just rated it 10 because I was lazy.... I honestly think this about your story!
I'm not too sure if you're still doing this but if you are, could you review my story 'The Donation'? Thank you
4/22/18