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Mean Tweets

Part 2

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Eleanor’s pov

Me and Louis had a lovely time, we had gone to lunch, went shopping and now we were back at my flat. I was upstairs putting away some of my new clothes. I looked over at the clock. 6:00. That’s why I was so hungry. Had we really been out shopping for nearly 6 hours? I decided to change into some sweatpants and a tshirt. I tossed my curly hair into a casual messy bun, before heading downstairs.
“I ordered pizza, love.” He says as I walk down.
“Okay, I’ll put on Netflix.” I said walking over to the tv. as it was loading up i hear a ding coming from the counter.
My phone.
Probably twitter. I looked to see if Louis noticed. He was looking right back at me. He knew it was twitter then.
“El, no.” he said.
“What do you mean?” I said playing dumb, casually strolling toward my phone. But he started running toward it, so I ran to it, trying to outrun him. But I failed. He leaped onto the counter and swiped up my phone. I looked up at my boyfriend standing on top of the counter holding my phone.
“Louis give me my phone.” I looked up at him.
“Nope.” He said shaking his head. I sighed.
“Boobear, love, can I please see my phone?” I asked again. He looked up pretending to think before answering again simply.
“No.”
“Why not?” I asked even though I knew why he wouldn’t give it to me.
“Because you’re not going to read any mean tweets. We’re going to have fun tonight.” He said not showing any signs of stepping off the counter.
“It could be a text.” I said.
“Nope. It’s twitter.” He said sticking my phone in his back pocket.
“It could be a NICE tweet!” I said crossing my arms.
“I will check.” He says. He pulls out my phone unlocks it and reads for a second. He then looks at me, and puts my phone back in his pocket.
“You can’t have it back.” He says simply crossing his arms back.
“Louis. Give me my phone.” I said looking up at him.
“Absolutely not.” he says.
“You’re not my mum!”
“Do not speak to your mother like that!” He said getting offended. He looked rather ridiculous. I start laughing.
“What are you laughing at?” He says full of sass.
“You just look stupid up there.” I said trying to laugh harder. He hops off the counter pretending to be offended.
“The Tommo NEVER looks stupid!”
“Well Tommo are you going to give me my phone back?”
“Probably not.” he said I poked his sides lightly but it was enough to get a laugh out of him. He then looked at me. Before I could realize what was happening, he me lying on the couch, pinned down under him. giving me a love bite. I giggled trying to break from his grasp.
“Lou, give my phone!” I said trying to break free.
“But then you’ll read the tweet.” He rubbing his nose against mine.
“No I won’t.”
“Promise?”
“I, Eleanor Jane Calder promise I will not read that tweet.” I said. Hey I said I wouldn’t read THAT tweet. but it was enough for him. He let me up just as the doorbell was ringing.
“PIZZA!” he yelled, tossing my phone to me and running to the door. I sat down with my phone scrolling through netflix movies. I clicked on Dead Silence just as he was setting down the pizza. (A/n I haven’t actually seen this movie, I get scared WAY too easily to watch horror stuff. I just looked up horror on netflix and that popped up.) Louis looked at me confused.
“Eleanor, you’re terrified of horror movies. You get scared way too easily.” he said looking at the screen.
“I do not!” I said. Though he was kind of right. whatever I’ll just pretend to not be scared.
“Okay.” he said clicking play. I leaned into Louis’ chest. How bad can it be anyways?




I WAS SO WRONG. That movie was awful. I think Lou got a little scared too. I grabbed the remote and turned off the movie as soon as the credits started scrolling.
“Not that bad huh?” He said looking at me.
“It wasn’t that bad.” I lied.
“Whatever, you were so scared.” He laughed.
“I was not.” I lied again.
“Okay.” He said getting up and walking into the kitchen. “You can ahead and go up then, I’ll turn off all the lights and lock up. Since you’re not too scared.”
“Okay I will then.” I said, but when I turned to look up the dark staircase of my flat, and started thinking of all the things that could be hiding up there, all the places. I stopped in my tracks. I felt like a little kid, but I was just so horrified by that awful movie.
“I thought you were going up. Mrs. Soo brave.” Louis said coming up behind me wrapping his arms around my waist. I jumped a little. He laughed. “Is Eleanor too scared to go upstairs by herself.” Louis asked mockingly. my cheeks turned red.
“Whatever, let’s just go.” I said embarrassed, as we headed upstairs, not letting his hand go.
“Don’t worry.” He laughed, “I won’t let the monsters get you.”
“Well that’s great but what about the demonic dolls, and serial killers?” I asked jokingly as we got up to my room.
“Those too.” He laughed. I went into the bathroom taking off my makeup, and switching out my sweatpants for some spandex pants. I walked back in to Louis with his shirt off in bed on his phone. I smiled and climbed into bed with him. He put his phone on the table by the bed, and put his arms around my waist pulling me closer to him. I set my head on his chest, and he kissed my forehead.
“I love you Eleanor Jane Calder.” He said looking down at me. “Even if you are a big scaredy cat.” He laughed.
“And I love you Louis.” I said looking back at him. “Even if you’re mean.” I laughed.

Notes

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Comments

@Jules . Tomlinson

Thanks love!

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3/3/15

I love this story, keep up the great work :D

@maddy2379

Oh my Gosh thanks so much love! You literally how no idea how much this means to me, you just made my day!

louisxcarrots louisxcarrots
3/1/15

Holy god! Such amazing story.
You're a really amazing writer

maddy2379 maddy2379
2/28/15