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Mean Tweets

part 14


Louis POV

After Perrie got here we began thinking.
"Could she have gone shopping?" I asked Perrie.
"No, Eleanor hates shopping alone, she would have called me or Sophia." Perrie shook her head. "Are you sure she didn't have to go the university today?"
"Positive." I nodded.
"Maybe she went for a run." Perrie said.
"I'll go check." I said running up the stairs and in to our bedroom closet. I scanned her rack of shoes neatly lined up. Her trainers were missing.
"I think she did, her trainers are missing!" I called running down the stairs to Perrie.
"Well come on! I know where she goes running!" Perrie said I grabbed my keys off the counter and we hopped into my car. Perrie pointed the path she follows that leads to downtown Manchester.
"She sometimes stops here to get a coffee." Perrie says pointing to the Starbucks. I nod at park my car in the nearest spot. I turn the keys shutting off the engine and quickly jump out of the car. Perrie is already inside I jog to catch up with her and she slams her hands on the counter making the barista jump slightly.
"We're looking for a girl who may have came through a little while ago. She has curly brown hair and is about this tall." Perrie says putting her hand out to mark about Eleanor's height. I look at the barista hoping that he will have some information about Eleanor.
"Sorry doesn't ring a bell." He says shaking his head. My heart sinks, this was our only lead. We turn around and are about to leave when we see a little boy run out and grab Perrie's leg.
"I saw her! I saw that girl!" He says tugging at her leggings!
"Toby!" I hear a lady scold from behind the counter. A young girl in a green Starbucks apron who looked mid twenties came out from behind the counter looking horrified.
"I'm so sorry, my babysitter bailed and I had to bring him along!" She says scooping up the little boy.
"I really did she a lady who looks like that mommy!" He says trying to push himself off of her.
"Oh he's no trouble at all!" Perrie says.
"Actually he may be helpful to us." I say. "Could you tell us where you saw her?"
"She was running outside and a man pushed her into a big white care!" He says pointing out to the street.
"Which way did the car go?" I asked panicked. My blood boils. A man had grabbed my Eleanor. I had to stop myself from thinking of the things they might do to her, I need to find her.
"They went that way, and then turned on that muddy road with the trees on it!" He yells.
"Thank you!" Perrie says and we're turn to leave before being stopped again.
"Wait!" The girl runs setting down Toby and running behind the counter. She comes back a few seconds later holding something black in her hands. When she gets closer I realise it's a gun. "This might help you find your friend." She says handing the weapon to me. I take it great fully. "Tell me when you find her." She says. I nod.
"Thank you so much!" Me and Perrie call at the same time. We dart out and inor the streets, not even bothering to get in the car we ran down the street, till reaching the dirt road surrounded by woods. We turned on it and followed it down. The path seemed like a makeshift driveway. It was rather bumpy covered in rocks and grass growing over it. We slowed down as we approached a gate, covered In bar wire. I turn to Perrie.
"You can turn back now. Go ahead and get the car and Bring it up to this gate. I'll save her I promise." I said hoping she'd leave, I didn't have a doubt that wherever I was headed was dangerous, and I didn't want Perrie getting hurt. Not only because of her well being but because if Zayn found out she got hurt, and that I was involved in any way he'd beat me to a pulp.
"Absolutely not!" Perrie said firmly. "She's my best friend and I'm going to help her!" Perrie says grabbed the top of the fence and hoisting her body over t before I could stop her. I decided that I didn't have time to arie with Perrie and I needed to focus on saving Eleanor, every moment that I waste she's hurting.
After climbing over the fence we take a sharp turn and stop. Seeing a creepy looking building that the driveway lead up to. I quickly grabbed Perrie by the wrist and dragged her into a nearby bush. We peeked over the top and looked at the house.
"Don't worry Eleanor," I whispered. "I'm coming to save you."

Notes

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Comments

@Jules . Tomlinson

Thanks love!

louisxcarrots louisxcarrots
3/3/15

I love this story, keep up the great work :D

@maddy2379

Oh my Gosh thanks so much love! You literally how no idea how much this means to me, you just made my day!

louisxcarrots louisxcarrots
3/1/15

Holy god! Such amazing story.
You're a really amazing writer

maddy2379 maddy2379
2/28/15