Dirty Talks

So here we are, at Luke’s pool. Ashton and I were invited to a pool party. We have just gotten out of our clothes. Ashton already got in with all the others, as I’m still standing on the side.
"Come on, get in," Ashton says.
"But it’s cold," I whine.
Ashton thinks for a moment before saying: “If you get in, I’ll keep you warm.”
I give in and step in. It’s cold as fuck. Ashton immediatley drives me into a corner. With him being so close to me, I’ll probarely get hot soon. Also because of the fact that he looks super sexy in his swimwear.
"How about I’ll get you warm now," he softly says.
I nod as his hand cradles my neck. His lips slowly go up to my neck too. When he starts to suck on my sweet spot, I start to get a little wet. His other hand goes to run up and down my side. His finger lingers on the top of my bikini shorts. He carefuly slips his hand in my short. He gently starts rubbing me.
"Is daddy getting you warmer?" he asks in a whisper.
"Yes," I say as the grip on my neck tightens.
He starts sucking on my neck. My body really is getting warmer. As he presses his hips against mine, I feel how had he is. I decide to help him out a bit. I slip my hand into his swimwear and wrap my hand around him. He gasps against my neck. Soon followed by a soft moan.
"Let’s take it up a nodge," he says.
He slides his trunks down a bit. With one hand he takes his member and with the other he pushes my short aside. He slides himself in very slowly. I won’t lie; with Ashton calling himself ‘daddy’ he got me soaking. Our pace is agonizing slow. Careful not to slosh the water.
"Show daddy how good this makes you feel, baby girl," he whispers in my ear.
I bite my lip and let out a stiffled moan. He pushes me up a little, getting a better angle. His hands are on my thighs. One of them goes up to my neck and holds it in a tight grip.
Even at this slow pace I’m getting close soon. I grab his shoulder and try to hold it in longer. I need him closer. Which happens after a while.
"Come on, baby girl. Show daddy how good you can be," he growls softly against my neck.
My grip on his shoulders become tighter as I release myself around him. With a couple of hard, fast thrusts he comes too.
As he lets me down, he pulls out. He plants a soft kiss on my head. I smile a little and look up to him.
"You sure got me warm, sugar."

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