Girl!!!!! Let me start off by saying I only intended on reading the first five chapters, but I couldn't put it down! I'm hooked! I love the originality of this story. Honestly, I've been looking for a new story to read and I've finally found it.

I really enjoy Tyra's character. She actually reminds me of someone I know, which makes it even better because she sounds so realistic. Also, for some odd reason I love Zayn as a doctor lol.

The pace that you are revealing things is perfect. Not too much, not too little. The fact that your build is on point makes the read even better for me. There are only a couple things that I want to point out.

There were some grammar and spelling errors. Of course like any other person, there are bound to be spelling mistakes. Now, this is in my opinion but when they said 'I love you' to each other...I feel like it was extremely casual. I didn't expect them to say it just yet. BUT with the way you've been writing, I'm more than positive I'll enjoy the rest of the story just as much as what I've already read.

Please don't ever stop writing, your work is beautiful! Xoxo

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