Reviews

I read the first 20 chapters and I had to stop. Before you think this is bad, it's not.

Cassidy, she is a very angry character. I have to admit I couldn't really click with her for most of the chapters until more of her story was explained. More specifically when Matt explained it to Harry. That's when my opinion about her completely turned around. Now, especially since she battling with herself, I'm really starting to like her. She is full of sass and pride. I think her character is just hard to connect with in the beginning.

What throws me off about Harry is that no matter is Cassidy cussed him out or flipped him the bird he was still intrigued. Most men/boys would have been done with her way earlier on. BUT, this is your story and write it however you see fit. In the same sense, the more you read the more the characters grow on you. The way these two banter back a forth crack me up.

What I especially love is the lack of grammar issues!!!! I can't tell you how much I love reading and not having to re-read a sentence because of spelling or grammar errors. You take your time with this story, that's what I really like about it. It's not rushed in the least bit.

I will say is that there is cussing up the ying yang in this story. All the while I myself have the mouth of a sailor, I think it might rub some readers a certain way. There are people who don't really care for much of that. BUT, like I always say, 'I'm not everybody's cup of tea'. You're not going to please everyone and that's ok. You have a fan base for the story, so you must be doing something right. I personally love it. Yes, it took a couple chapters to get in to it but nevertheless... On that note, let me finish reading it :)

Xoxo

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