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So with this story it jumped around quickly for me. Yes, the story is still in the early stages but I feel like within the chapters you've written a lot has happened. Your story line is great and I can appreciate the darker take you have. It's not candy and roses and that's what I like about it. I see the potential but I feel like the build is missing. I love the fact that there are little to no grammar issues, and I can't tell you how much of a pet peeve that is of mine. You definitely have potential, that's for sure. I think if you just take the time to map out the story it'll be very inviting.

Don't get discouraged girl, your stories definitely have a fan base and people like them the way it is. This is just my opinion.

Keep writing, I really want to see where you take this one

:)

xoxo

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