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Leave Your Lover

Summary

Copyright © 2014 by Telichia DLR. All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced, stored in or introduced into a retrieval system, or transmitted, in any form or by any means, without the prior written permission of the author.



This is a work of fiction. Names, places, incidents and dialogues are products of the authors imagination or are used fictitiously.


Here is the link to the second book to this one; Not Just Friends.


Louis and Vivian grew up together.
Where normal babies would have 'Mommy' or 'Daddy' as their first word, Louis' first word was 'Vi' and Vivian's was 'Lou'.
Through out the years, their friendship grew stronger.
Louis always tried protecting Vivian from heartaches, but the day she fell in love wth one of his best mates, he didn't have a say in it. He was happy for them though. He looked up to their relationship.
But 4 years later when he falls in love with her, will he win her heart? Will she feel the same?







"Tell me about her!" I playfully slap Lou's shoulder. I've been trying to get him to tell me about the girl he likes for an hour now.
"Well, she has beautiful eyes," he looks at me and smiles. He leans closer and whispers in my ear
"The kind you could get lost in. And I guess I did," he tells me









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Comments

@Telichia DLR
I can't wait!

queen.lizzy queen.lizzy
1/4/15

@LIZZY THAT GIRL
Thank you for the comment. There is going to be a second book up before Wednesday. The second book is going to be much different, there's already depressing things written from not only Louis' POV. So I'm excited about posting that chapter for you guys. I'm glad that you like this story, thank yyou for reading it. Much love dear xoxo

Telichia DLR Telichia DLR
1/4/15

Throughout this whole story, I wanted Vivian to be with Louis, but as I read how Liam is heartbroken, my heart yearned for Liam. When Liam and Vivian got back together and she got her memory back, I felt my heart break for Louis. Gosh, this story got me loving both Louis and Liam. At this point, even though the story ended, I still don't know who to pick. My mind keeps going back to when Liam slapped Vivian and when Liam called Vivian a slut when they were at Zayn's house, so I don't know if I want to forgive him for that. But then again, Liam was so loving towards her and doesn't seem like he would do it again. I think Louis doesn't love her in that way. He THINKS that he loves her, but his love for her is more in a best friend way. So, I guess my mind is made up. Liam makes her happy. Liam needs her and she needs him. Liam and Vivian would be better off with each other as a couple than Louis and Vivian. I love this story! I know I have commented throughout this story, but to be honest, I started reading this story only yesterday. But overall, I love it! I love the storyline, I love the plot, I love everything about it! This is like no other story I've read before! Amazing work! Are you making a second book or making a epilogue? I think and epilogue would be better for this type of story insted of a second book unless you have more ideas coming. Once again great job on this! :)

queen.lizzy queen.lizzy
1/4/15

@breadboy101
Thank you <333 The second book will be up shortly :)

Telichia DLR Telichia DLR
1/4/15

@Mimi_Bell
No, they can't. ;)

Telichia DLR Telichia DLR
1/4/15
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