Rating:9.9

Chapters:Your chapters were kept very interesting!I have nothing else to say about them because everything was good.You had drama and all the stuff I've been looking for.

Grammar:Your grammar was okay.You missed some punctuation marks here and there and at time you did curse a little bit too much.

Flow:The flow of your story was right on track!

Extra comments:I really love your story!I encourage you to keep going!

Notes

Heyy!I've been busy with some stuff lately but I have been able to focus on this!

~xx Juli