Rating:9.9

Chapters:Your chapters were short but still kept very interesting.I understand how you have to leave cliff hangers here and there,but you could at least add some stuff in between.

Grammar:Your grammar was perfect!You did miss some words or had had a few typos but they were still readable.

Flow:I have nothing to say about this because the flow of you story was right on track.It wasn't too fast or too slow either,you did an amazing job on that!

Extra comments:I really love your story,it is amazing!I encourage you to keep writing!

Notes

Heyy!How are all the directioners doing in here?Also if anyone has a birthday today....HAPPY BIRTHDAY!(Invite me to your party)haha I feel so hyper.Anyways if you want me to review your story just go ahead and comment Down below!

~xx Juli