Rating:8.7

Chapters:Your chapters were kept very interesting but they were also very short.You need a little bit more detail here and there.The two chapters you wrote would've made a great first chapter.Making long chapters really gets the readers hooked because they know how much work you put into it.Even if you don't update for a week your readers won't get mad because they know how long your chapters are.

Grammar:Your grammar was very good!I barely noticed any mistakes,I did see some typos but it was still readable.

Flow:Your story was a little bit rushed.Like one day she was at the hospital the next she at the dance studio.What you could do was something like when she was walking home she walked by the dance studio and the next day she got a tour and saw Louis dancing.

Extra Comments:I really loved your story!I encourage you to keep writing and ignore the haters along the way.

Notes

Being a badass and not writing in the notes.Dang it,I just did.Haha this is my second review!If you want me to review any of your stories go ahead and leave a comment down below!

~xx Juli