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All It Takes Is One Bite

Chapter 77 part 2

"That's a girl Eleanor always brave!" Harry said giving her a hug. El smiled
"Actually I'm terrified" she whispered to me. I hugged her reassuringly and told her everything is going to be fine. We explained how the plan would go and handed her the ring. She tried it on every finger not sure which to put it on. Then she went to the bathroom and we waited for her to come out before we talked to Louis.
"Zayn are you ready to open and lock the door?" I asked. Zayn nodded.
"Ok Harry let's do this" I said and walked into Louis room with Harry behind me.
"Here to bleed me out again?" Louis spat.
"No we're here to give you one last chance to turn your emotions on" harry said.
"Never!" Louis replied.
"Ok then Louis we have a visitor for you" and Eleanor walked in.
"Ooh you brought the slut" Louis said. Then he pinched himself. Our louis was fighting back! Eleanor looked like she was trying to not cry.
"Louis, Eleanor here is seeing you for her last time" Harry acted. The plans working.
"What do you mean Styles?" Louis questioned.
"She annoys me and everyone else and we wanted to kill her all along. But that would make you sad. But now you're a monster and we don't care about you we thought we can finally kill her" Harry said casually. Not a bad actor apart from the fact he was trembling as he spoke.
"Sure Styles you don't have the guts to kill" Louis laughed. But he didn't sound like he was sure harry wouldn't kill Eleanor.
"I kill every night. So watch me!" He says and grabs Eleanor. "Bye bye" he says and with a quick swift crack he snaps her neck. Eleanor falls to the floor. She'd be dead for about ten minutes before the ring brought her back to life.
"ELEANOR!!!" Louis screamed. "NO MY SOULMATE!" He cried. He was in a crumpled heap sobbing and crying. Showing emotion!
"Louis you're back!" Harry shouted and hugged his best mate. Louis glared at him.
"YOU KILLED ELEANOR!!!" He screamed and attacked Harry. The two boys rolled on the floor fighting and biting. Vampire fighting is very vicious. I tried to break it up. This wasn't supposed to happen. Eventually Harry and I managed to pin down Louis and explain about the ring.
"But she isn't wearing a ring"Louis said pointing at Eleanor's hand. I let out a chocked sob. He was right. Louis and I clung to Harry crying. Eleanor gone. No!
"Why are you guys crying? The plan worked" said a very familiar female voice.
"ELEANOR!!!" We shouted and hugged her. Louis kissed her passionately.
"But how are you alive you weren't wearing the ring?" I asked after we had calmed down a little.
"Well I was thinking maybe Louis knew about protector rings so I thought of he saw me wearing one he'd guess our plan. So I wore it on my toe." She smiled and gave Louis a hug.
"You're so weird. That's why you and me are friends" I laughed.
We did the secret knock on the door and Zayn opened it. Louis walked out after me and the boys rugby tackled him with a big hug. Ally jumped on him and kissed him lightly on the cheek.
"Oh my God Ally I'm so sorry about the other night it wasn't me." Louis apologised.
"It's ok you're back now" Ally smiled
"So to celebrate let's go for dinner and maybe clubbing afterwards?" Harry suggested.
"Ya!!!!!' Louis shouted. It was good to have our old loud, funny Louis back..........

Comments

@Mrs--Styles
i would say at the end it's more Niall but throughout it there's a bit of everyone like at the beginning it's more Louis and Harry since they are vampires and that but Rachel is the main character and Niall is obviously dating her so it kind of changes through out :)
Emmaaaa Emmaaaa
11/2/13
Is this a Niall Story or A Harry Story??
Because I'm Confused
@Liam Payne is mine
@Emmaaaa
I would love to check it out EPPPPPP!!!! (: <3
@Rockel_Arora_Direction_
there are a lot of vampire stories especially if you check out wattpad oh and i have a sequel to this and another vampire story called vampire world if you want to check that out :) <3
Emmaaaa Emmaaaa
10/29/13