Login with:

Facebook

Twitter

Tumblr

Google

Yahoo

Aol.

Mibba

Your info will not be visible on the site. After logging in for the first time you'll be able to choose your display name.

All It Takes Is One Bite

chapter 2


Louis Tomlinson is the guy I have to find. Shit, shit, shit there is too many people in here. I can't go through everyones minds. Oh no, the vampire! Shit he isn't in here any more if I was him where would I take him or just any human in fact.
THE ALLY!
I ran as fast as I could at human speed. I couldn't risk anyone seeing me even if they are drunk and high. Finally I reached the exit I hope he is out there. I can hear someones thoughts but there unfamiliar maybe this is him.

I open the door. I see the two guys I wanted to but there are two vampires and the guy I suspect to be a Louis. Wow he is really good look.. Focus Rachel! I snap myself out of my thoughts. I manage to snap the unfamiliar vamps heads straight off but i get pinned up next to Louis on the wall. I can hear his thoughts. I basically know his full life.
I need to help him get out of here all the same.

I struggle with all my strength to get out and to free louis. i kick the vampire in the balls. He drops me but still has a firm hold on Louis. I was about to lunge on him to rip his head off but he says:
"take one more step and I'll kill him. Your choice this innocent sweet boy killed or undead like us?"

Notes

I've updated again tell me what you think and comment if you want me to update :)

Comments

@Mrs--Styles
i would say at the end it's more Niall but throughout it there's a bit of everyone like at the beginning it's more Louis and Harry since they are vampires and that but Rachel is the main character and Niall is obviously dating her so it kind of changes through out :)
Emmaaaa Emmaaaa
11/2/13
Is this a Niall Story or A Harry Story??
Because I'm Confused
@Liam Payne is mine
@Emmaaaa
I would love to check it out EPPPPPP!!!! (: <3
@Rockel_Arora_Direction_
there are a lot of vampire stories especially if you check out wattpad oh and i have a sequel to this and another vampire story called vampire world if you want to check that out :) <3
Emmaaaa Emmaaaa
10/29/13