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Totally FanGirl

Unexpected Visitor

Nialls POV

I stuffed my face with cheese doodles at the snack-bar. Yum. Just what I need to block out screaming girls.

Don't get me wrong, I love our fans, but tonight I was a little fed up with all of it. Poppy sat across the room texting and looking up at me every few seconds. I would look up at her, then her eyes would dart away. Zayn approached me.

"Hey Niall."

"Hi." I mumled

He nudged me "Soooo, she seems nice. You like her?"

I raised an eyebrow "Nah, she's just another fan girl, Zayn."

He strugged and backed off "Okay I see you need some alone time."

Everyone exept Poppy and I sat at the large bar in the corner of the room chatting. The rumb;e of heavy footsteps filled my ears and the door was thrown open.

Behiend it was a man in a black mask. His hand was hidden in his jacket. At his feet lay....Paul....with a knife sticking out of his chest.

"PAUL!" Harry screamed standing up. Liam and Louis followed. The rest of us seemed to be in pure shock.

The man walked into the room and headed toward Poppy. He lifted her out of her loveseat by her hair. She yelped in pain. "Don't mak any sudden movements." the strangers hand emerged from his coat."I want you to empty your pockets and hand over everything." A menacing looking gun was gripped in 4 fingers,where his thumb should have been a stump took it's place.

"Poppy, don't move!" I screamed. The man held the gun to her temple.

"Follow my instructions or I'll blow fan girl's brains out."

Liam begin to empty out each of his pockets. Harry sat weeping and staring at Paul. Louis gripped the other girls hand who was crying uncontrolably.

"DO IT NO-" the man begin before a black quiff popped up behiend him. A fist knocked him in the head sending him tumbling forard. However Zayn's attack still gave the man nough time to shoot one bullet, that peirced poppy's stomach.

Notes

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Comments

@Parislover1d
I'd love to read urs, I'll get right on it.
janoskians janoskians
5/11/13
@UncappedLipgloss
Okmi will check it out;) would mind reading mine?
Parislover1d Parislover1d
5/11/13
@Parislover1d
Hey, read my new story '50 First Dates'. I hope u like that one aswell.
janoskians janoskians
5/11/13
Awww, you all make me blush! I actually am about to make another story based on a movie I love! I think I'll start it NOW. <3
janoskians janoskians
5/11/13
Please do make another.i loveyour writing;)
Parislover1d Parislover1d
5/10/13