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Death Track

Chapter 27 Promise

Niall's pov

"What's wrong?" I asked a worried looking Annie. No not worried more sad and scared. What would be wrong with my Annie. Yes. My, in my eyes I think she always stays mine. But I hope one day she thinks so too.

"Nothing Ni, really. What made you think so." She said fiddling with her hands, and there was no doubt that she wasn't alright, I knew when she felt bad, or there was something going on.

"Please tell me, an. I know something's wrong." I pushed, I couldn't let my Annie be sad.

"I.. I should've told you two something.. I.. I just can't." She looked down sadly. What was it she couldn't tell us. She looked down and fiddled with the hem of her shirt.

"You can tell us, we aren't going to be mad, we would never get mad at our little Annie." She was little Annie because she was the youngest, she was by everyone known als little Annie. It was just her nickname.

"That isn't the point, but I just get scared, because I don't want to believe it, I .... please, I can't, because I don't want to leave." Her voice started to tremble and I knew she could break out crying every minute from now.

"What do you mean leave?" I asked her, maybe she would go on vacation, or she would leave our school. that wasn't so bad.

"I'm leaving Niall, for forever." those words broke me, she wasn't going to leave, she was my angel, my princes, she couldn't leave, it wasn't right. I maybe have heard something wrong, she probably said 'for fever'? I have truly no idea why she would say that.

"what?" Carmen's voice filled my ear, I had forgot about her. In this situation she was like the third wheel not saying a thing and just being there.

"I'm leaving tomorrow to go to the united states, My family is settling down there I'm not going back." she said and looked up from looking at her feet. she couldn't leave me, I mean us.

"no, no, no." I said running a hand trough my hair and messing it up. she couldn't leave. I saw tears spilling from her eyes and even Carmen shed a tear.

"Niall, I'm sorry, b-but before I leave I want to tell you two something please don't forget the words I say. you two are amazing people never think otherwise. please stay together as friends, I can't see you apart. Niall." she turned her attention towards me, more tears spilled and I felt the hot liquid run down my cheeks.

"you have an amazing voice, and I know you're going to make it. you're going to be bigger then The Beatles, backstreet boys and whatever, just promise me you will think of me from time to time when you're on stage or behind it. because I know what fame can do to you, please promise me?"

"I promise."

"and Carmen, you're beautiful I know some day you will be an actirce or an model, boys swooning over you. but you don't go for looks, you go for the heart. you're one of the strongest persons I know, although life is going to be hard at some point for you, when maybe even best friends leave you, just remember you have them in your heart, or up side watching over you. although you have a bad future for you because people telling you so, don't worry. please promise me you will stay that strong person." she asked.

"I promise." she hugged us both tightly before she had to leave. that was the last day I saw her. she gave us her phone number, but forgot she got another that's why we aren't in contact. she moved to LA and her blond hair and brown eyes were never seen by me again.

I tried to live up to the promises I made, and strangely I got famous, even more famous than The Beatels or the backstreet boys. It was like she knew...

But she couldn't. Other wise she could tell I was going to tell her I loved her, ow yeah isn't going to work now she's leaving.

But anyway she can't look into the future. That would be creepy, but so cool at the same time. I know I let my imagination get to me, but I don't care. I LOVE IT. sorry no.

I snapped out of my daze, as Harry pulled me up to my feet. Worry was all written over his face, so was it with the others who surrounded me. They looked at me and noticed I was awake.

"Niall!" they exclaimed as they hugged me and I smiled, but the thought of why they would be worried still lingered inside my head.

"Don't scream." I snapped. They weren't taken back by it but got themselves quiet. That was until Louis opened his mouth.

"Are you alright. It's nothing like you to stay like this." he said concerned. I looked up at Louis by blue eyes. His concerned face bothered me the most. Louis wasn't a person to be concerned.

"Yeah. Why would there be?" I questioned confused. Relieve washed over their faces as they watched me sit up straight.

"You wouldn't answer our calls, and you were past out on your own door step. Couldn't think of anything good now could we." Liam said a bit angry. Probably because I worried him.

"I'm sorry alright. It's just that... that Carmen.." I couldn't say it. So I handed them the note and the pushed around until they all read it. Harry was the first to blink as tears pricked in his eyes. He wrapped his arms around and hugged me tight. I hugged him back the tears flowing again.

"I'm sorry." He whispered.

"The worst is that I didn't even know until now. How long is she dead."

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