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Dancing with a Star

19. Judge's Choice

A Few Weeks Later
“This week is what I call redemption week, but with a twist,” I said, smiling.
“What is this week?”
“This week is judge’s pick. They pick either what they really liked or one they hated and feel like you’ve improved a lot since this dance.”
“Which did they pick?”
“I’m not sure. A judge will be in to tell us.”
As if on cue, there was a knock on the door. I smiled and skipped over to the door, squealing when I saw Bruno.
“You’re our judge?”
“I’m your judge!”
“Alright, Bruno, what dance are we doing?”
“You are redoing the hip hop.”
My grin grew like a chesire cat.
“Niall, it was honestly your worse dance but that was not your fault. Len and I feel you should redo it, to let America know that it wasn’t you.”
“Now, due to what Emily did, I must choose your song.”
“What have you chosen?”
Where Them Girls At?”
I felt my jaw drop.
“Is the producer okay with it?”
“Screw him. Almost everyone knows anyways.”
“Wait, what?”
“What? That you both were good at hiding it?”
Niall and I looked at each other.
“Yeah, we actually did.”
“Well, you aren’t. Only a few people actually know that you are together. I know because Mark let it slip, and then obviously Mark, Whitney, and Peta because you told them.”
Niall looked at me while I bit my lip, keeping my eye on Bruno.
“You better be glad Mark hates Carrie Ann and Len hates Mark though.”
I smiled.
“I know, that’s why I wasn’t worried about telling Mark.”
Bruno laughed.
“Alright, well you make up the routine and I will be back in a couple days to see how it’s going.”
We nodded and waved at him.
Niall left, saying that he was going to get Wesley from my mom and that he would be back soon.
I started the song up, feeling the beat throughout my body. Mark had come in there to help me create my dance, as he was about the same size as Niall.
“So many girls in here, where do I begin?
I see this one, I’m about to go in.
Then she says, ‘I am here with my friends’
She got me thinking and that’s when I said:
‘Where them girls at, girls at?’ [x3]
‘So go get them and we can all be friends’
Hey, bring it on, bring all your friends you’re the shit and I love that body.
You wanna ball, lets mix it, I swear you're good, I won’t tell nobody.
You got a BFF, I wanna see that girl, it's all women invited
Hair do's and nails, that Louis, Chanel all up in the party
President's in my wallet, no rules I'm bout it
Blow the whistle for the hotties
I got it, shawty, it's never too much, can't be doing too much
Ten to one of me, I can handle that love
Outta of my reach, we can all get buzz
Holla cause I'm free, no matter it's no rush
So many boys in here, where do I begin?
I see this one, I'm ‘bout to go in
Then he said, I'm here with my friends
He got me thinking and that's when he said
Where them girls at, girls at? [x3]
So go get them, we can all be friends
Peebe, peebe, who's Peebe Barsin?
Two years ago I renewed my license
Anyway why'd I start my verse like that
'Cause I can do it, you can suck on a ballsack
No no I don't endorse that, pause that, abort that
Just the other day mi go London, saw that, kids down the street
Paparazzi, all that
Hey, hey what can I say?
Day day day da-day day
Coming through the club all the girls in the back of me
This ain't football why the fuck they trying to tackle me?
Really, I pick dude at the bar like really,
Looking like, he wanna good time like really
Said he had a friend for my home girl Lilly, Lilly, Lilly, Lilly
So many girls in here where do I begin
I see this one, I'm ‘bout to go in
Then she said I'm here with my friends
She got to thank us, then that's when he said
Where them girls at, girls at? [x3]
So go get them, we can all be friends
Where my girls at uh, hm, uh [2x]
Yo, where my girls at uh, hm, uh
Yo, where my girls tryna get to jumpin'
So many girls in here, where do I begin?
I see this one, I'm ‘bout to go in
Then she said, I'm here with my friends
She got me thinking and that's when I said
Where them girls at, girls at? [x3]
So go get them, we can all be friends”
I was finished by the time the song finished, but played it again to record myself.
When I was through the second time around, I hit the stop button and played it back, smiling at the finished project.
“Momma!” I heard from the door.
I turned just in time to see Wesley run towards me.
“Hey booger!” I said, picking him up.
“Momma, guess what?”
“What?”
“Mimi has a boyfriend.”
My mouth dropped open.
“How do you know that Wesley?”
“He came by to bring her breakfast this morning.”
“Oh did he?” I questioned, knowing that answer all too well.
We’ve used it on Wes with Niall constantly.
“Yeah, just like Mr. Niall does for you after he stays over.”
“Wait, what?”
“Oh, please, Momma. I’m four, I’m not a baby anymore.”
I laughed and looked at Niall who was watching us with a smile on his face.
“You wanna see the routine? I’m done with it.”
“I’m never going to say no to that.”
I played it back for him and Niall’s eyes grew wide.
“Evelina, I can’t do that!”
“Yes you can! It’s the same difficulty that all of the other dances have been.”
“We’ll talk about this later,” Niall said, looking pointedly at Wesley.
I nodded and set Wesley down.
“Wes, go get Uncle Mark for me.”
Wesley ran out of the room.
“Alright, what are you scared of?”
“It’s just, when I saw Emily’s routine, I knew it wasn’t going to be difficult for me because I can’t hip hop dance! I tried on X-Factor and got kicked off the show for it!”
“What did I tell you when you first walked through that door?”
“That you knew our reputation and you were gonna change that for one of us.”
“Exactly. You’re gonna dance to this, Niall, and you are going to do it flawlessly.”
He smiled and pecked my lips softly, making me smile into the kiss. We pulled away and rested our foreheads together until we heard a throat clearing.
“I can feel the tension in here. You know, B has been wanting to take him for a night,” Mark said, winking at me.
“Are you serious?”
“Yeah, she said she misses him like crazy. He’s always good and I think babysitting him for your mom will be good for her. Maybe it’ll hold her off on the whole baby thing until we at least get married.”
I laughed, hearing plenty of how she was trying to convince Mark on getting pregnant right then.
He wanted to wait until they were married a year, she wanted a baby now.
“Is that the compromise?”
“That’s the compromise.”
I smiled.
“What time do y’all want to pick him up?”
“I could just come get his stuff now and take him on. We have no plans tonight.”
“Ugh. Yeah, just text B and make sure it’s okay.”
He pulled out his phone and I crouched down to Wesley’s height.
“Are you going to be good for Uncle Mark and Aunt B?”
“Yes, Momma.”
“Don’t keep them up again? Uncle Mark will bring you here in the morning, okay?”
“Yes, Momma.”
I smiled and stood back up right as Mark’s phone beeped.
He laughed as he opened the text.
My Queen B: Yes!! Will gladly let him come over for the night so they can relieve their sexual tension. ;) tell Evelina to wear that lingerie we bought her the other day!
I rolled my eyes, but packed up his things quickly.
Honestly? I was nervous as hell, but they were right. Over these past few weeks, something has changed in us. We have been more touchy, grabby, and steamy.
We’ve never gone there because either Wesley was in the house or was about to be.
Niall insisted we not do it, something about wanting it to be special.
I love him more for that, even though I haven’t told him that yet.
“Hey, love, since Mark is taking Wesley. Go get ready into something nice. I’m taking you out.”
I smiled and ran up the stairs with full intentions of wearing exactly what B told me to.

Notes

Hello, everyone!
Thank you so much to everyone who voted! Y'all are amazing!
I honestly am in tears how much this story has grown and how much people are loving it.
Don't worry. Next chapter your gonna get some Niall and Evelina time. :)
What's gonna happen?
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One will never know (well except me!) :)

Comments

@Kay Kay
I can't wait to update! It will be tomorrow because I have to be up in 6 hours... DX

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10/29/16

@Niallmylove66
Thank you so much! That means a lot!

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10/29/16

@LivinLikeLarry
Definitely! Denny's is definitely better! I like the nachos at Dennys. :) Waffle House just isn't good to me. My family loves it, but it makes me sick.

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10/29/16

OUR DANCE!!!! Ayyy I loved this story can't wait for the next one...

OutCast. OutCast.
10/29/16

Awwwwww so cute!!
And Dennys over Waffle House ANY DAY lol

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10/28/16