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Story Ideas!

The Naive and the Rebellious

[STATUS: NOT TAKEN]

one day a boy [your decision on who it is out of 5/5] was asked to run to the nearest pharmacy to pick up prescriptions for his grandmother. he's done this multiple times already the past summer, and always took the same route his mother told him to go to to pick them up.

heading outside of his home to go and get them, he sees his best friend who asks if he has enough time to go and do something with them (an activity or whatever) but then the boy rejects his friend reasoning.

his friend asks if he/she can come along with him and the boy isn't so sure about the idea, but he eventually gives in due to peer pressure.

the boy was about to head to the pharmacy the same old way when his friend asked if they could take the other way there since that other way was shorter. the boy refused but him being a naive boy who didn't know much about the troubles of the world, he gave in and tagged along with his friend.

after they get to the pharmacy and get the medicine for his grandmother, the friend suggests hanging out for a little while. the boy, worried that doing something now would be a bad time to do so starts hesitating but before he could make a decision his friend is already running towards the park nearby.

by the time they finished playing [sport] at the park, using the free equipment the park had, the boy realizes that evening was already dawned upon them. the boy begins worrying, still not having the prescriptions given to his family. he quickly dismisses himself from his friend and tries running back to his family.

on the way back he looks over and sees a body laying on top of a branch of a tree out in the distance. he pauses, only because he was captivated by the sight. the sun reflecting down upon the world while the human and tree was out in the open made it a beautiful sight.

when he gets back, he is scolded by his mother.

when evening struck the next day, he went back to the place where he saw the sun, the human, and the tree in the view.

and turned out, the human was perched up on the tree again; back pressed against the bark.

keep in mind that this boy was naive, and easily gave into peer pressure.. he didn't have much of a voice.

the person who was on the tree is exactly the opposite of his personality. she suppressed her feelings, and rarely listened to others. she was rebellious and lived on the edge of life. she also has a tragic secret, as to why she always spends her days out in the open at evening.

but what if the boy decides to have the courage to go up and meet the person he's been admiring from afar?

before he knew it, he was becoming even more attached to her every single day..









but it was quite terrible to know that she had to leave by the end of summer, and he didn't know about it at all.


you can continue from there..


Notes

yeah so, basically the girl [or boy..] is a tsundere which basically means they are really cold on the outside but eventually starts warming up to you.

this idea though gets me wondering if there are such naive boys in the world.. maybe.

Comments

@Navy blue
yes, you can! anyone can be able to use some ideas, (:

xStylishStyles xStylishStyles
8/23/14

I like the idea of the naive and rebellious. May i use it? But just change it up a little?

Navy blue Navy blue
8/22/14