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Prisoning Truth

Forbidden Mistake. (6th Chapter)

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Giselle's POV:
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Once Louis finishes untying my ankles, he rushes to the back of the chair, breaking down the knot over my wrists. “(He speaks calmly) Giselle, I am doing this because you shouldn’t be tied up barbarically. Please promise me you won’t do anything? (I bob my head, as he sighs in relief) I trust you, so please don’t let me down, alright?” I nod again, as the knot loosens out of my wrists; allowing me to move my arms to the front.





I whimper once I see the red markings over my wrists, assumingly by the hold of the tight ropes. I place my hands over my lap, while Louis sits cross- legged in front of me. His tiny hand holds the sandwich, handing it to me slowly. “Eat up, love. (He smiles) I grabbed you some clothes that I managed to find, so once you’re done you can have a shower. Sounds good?”





I draw a weak smile over my lips as I begin chewing the bites of bread. “(He hands me the glass) Here, drink up. You need water too.” I gladly take the cup from his hand, gulping half of it at the contact of the moisture. His smile stays steady, as he keeps staring at me with complete warmness. “(I whisper) Am I allowed to ask you, or does the same rule apply to you too?”





He furrows his eyebrows at my request, as he questions: “What rule, love?” I let myself swallow, before I speak again. “That guy… the one that was here. He slapped me for asking a simple question.” Louis’s face hardens, as his eye graze over my assumingly red cheek; noticing the mark of harshness. “Let him stick his finger up his ass. (He smiles when I giggle lightly) Ask me whatever comes to your mind.”





“Why did you three kidnap me?” His smile minimizes at my question, but it still shows on his features. “We didn’t kidnap you. (He corrects himself) Well, not me or the others personally. Harold did it, without letting us know. I knew about it when he came back with you in his arms.” Harold? Is that the name that the vicious person goes by?





“What others? Do you mean you and Niall?” He nods, and replies all together: “Well there are two more, other than Niall and I. But, they will assuredly be with your side of the argument. Harold is the only one that sticks out from our beliefs. Don’t get me wrong, he is a great lad when you get to know him; but he’s not stable with his desires.” I drink the rest of the water, as I process the information in my mind.





“What do you mean he isn’t stable with his desires?” Louis seemed to have slipped that information by mistake, so he let out an expressive sigh. “Come on, are you ready to shower now?” I look at him, hesitating why he didn’t answer my other question, but I decide to let it go for now. “How long will I be here?” I ask him, as he helps me stand up from my seat.





“I’m not sure, Giselle. But, the guys and I will have a chat and we will convince Mr. sissy pants to let you go, good?” I smile warmly at Louis, as he grabs my hand kindly in his own; escorting me out of the dusty room.“(He whispers before stepping out) Try not to click those pink boots of yours, a lot. We don’t want the twat to know, deal?” I chuckle under my breath, earning a little smile from Louis thin lips.





As my heels touch the exterior of the room, I allow my eyes to wander over the place. It isn’t small; it’s quite huge and full of amazing artifacts that clearly seem to be rare. Just as I was about to shift my gaze to study a different area, Louis pauses the walk; squeezing my hand protectively in his.






“(He roars) WHERE ON EARTH ARE YOU TRYING TO TAKE HERE LOUIS?”
My body shivers, as I stare at the person blocking our walk. His breathing is similar to a bull’s heave; his eyes are just like the dagger he always threatens me with, darting my own eyes like I was a forbidden mistake.



Notes

Alright, this my official first note for this story :D Let's discuss the basics about Giselle's character, to widen up the idea of her personality (Y) She's the kind of person that doesn't feel the need of being social with anyone. She's simply very protective of herself, to the extreme of even trying to talk a walk at night (Y) Clearly, she was proven right because she got kidnapped at her first attempt to take a chance :/ Now, as for Louis, he's showing the caring shade of his personality, proving it by the treatment of care that he is providing to Giselle (Y) As for Harry, well I suppose you are all still a little confused about his character, because so far he has been showing the negativity and the hostility towards Giselle :( But Louis did mention something about his instability (Y) Still it is vague to estimate now, but the upcoming chapters will answer the mystery of his character <3

Questions for tomorrow: Emptied? Louis is in shock? Brown and Hazel? Harry Agreeing, but on one condition? :O

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Comments

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Oh my god!! The ending of this chapter was so sad.

@Starzella

Thank you love you sis and if you wanna know i am going to update my story soon it's going to be badass bec your finally going to know why hary dit it

@princesslingley

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8/26/14

@Starzella

why does it have to end now. it's so awesome, it is the best fanfic ever.
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