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Prisoning Truth

Cookie Monster. (24th Chapter)

… An Hour Later…




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Giselle's POV:
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“(I groan) Harry, please I can’t eat anymore cookies.” He chuckles, trying to feed me yet another round biscuit. We’ve been chucking cookies since the past hour, laughing at how we both reacted and moaned at the sweet taste. “(He fake frowns) Such a shame, you lose then. (He pops the entire cookie in his mouth) I declare that I’m the cookie monster.” I giggle at his silliness, while I whimper from my stuffed tummy.





“(I beg) Please don’t make me laugh, it hurts.” He chuckles stupidly, trying to swallow the entire biscuit, which makes me laugh harder; holding my tummy from the feeling. He takes what’s left from my glass, chugging the remains of milk to ease his throat.“(I yawn, covering my mouth with my palm) I think its time I got some sleep. You should sleep too, Harry.”





I get down from the kitchen stool, beginning my tired walk out of the kitchen. I turn my head to look at him, before pushing the sliding door.“(He smiles genuinely) I’ll clean up and follow you. (He corrects his words) I mean not like follow you to your bed, I’ll follow your lead and go to sleep too. (I giggle, once a light pink shade hovers over his cheeks) Sleep tight, yeah?” I nod, maintaining my smile as I leave the kitchen.





To be quite honest and precise, I have never felt better since the moment I came here. Why? Because this is the fist time I notice how humane, tender, funny, and sensitive Harry truly is. Silly me, I should have known that if I gave him the attention that he was trying to seek out from me; he’d show the real person that could steal my breath away.






All what Harry wants from me, is attention, affection, and care. It’s true that he’s hiding this fact with his mean act, but now that I get him; I know that I should change with him entirely. Harry is trying to relive the moments of his childhood, the ones that used to make him happy and contempt. All he seeks is attention, and I will grant it all to him; since he revealed his feelings towards me.





Speaking of feelings, I did promise myself to lock the forming sensation that I get whenever he’s around; but I don’t think that’s going to ever happen as planned. He has that light that could strike over the dimness of the harsh world, he has the ability to erase the darkness and make it glitter with serenity. He doesn’t know that, but I do more than anyone else.






I push my suitcase into the room, flicking the lights on to change into my sleepwear. As I discard my jacket, a soft knock dabs the wooden door from the outside. I slowly peel it opened, smiling at his ruffled hair. “(He speaks shyly) I just wanted to say ‘good night’ properly… so uh, good night Giselle.” I giggle at his innocent features, yet his body reflects maturity which is carved like a Greek god’s statue.





“Good night, Harry.” He closes his eyes, smiling for some unknown reason. “(He whispers with optimism) Say it, again please…” I roll my eyes, chuckling at the awkwardness that began striking me; with it came the redness attack over my cheeks. “Go to bed, Harry.” He sighs, while nodding his head. As I begin to close the door, his voice mumbles something under his breath; which I think it sounded like: “This is the first night I’d sleep peacefully.”

Notes

Speaking of Harry being the cookie monster, watch this: (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H0VXWTMMteI) <3 :D <3
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As for the notes, well there is a lot to explain, so here it goes: Giselle wanted to leave, because she felt that she's the one causing all of the tension between the boys. She blamed herself, and felt bad for being held responsible for this war of friends. She wanted to leave, and she even said that she didn't care anymore if Santers got her captive under his hands anymore; yes she was that sick and tired of this whole process. Now I know some of you are asking: "This Santers guy keeps on getting mention, and all we know about him is that he wants Giselle and that he holds the boys' family captive. Isn't eh going to show up?" He will trust me, and sooner than you expect :D All I ask from you is patience, because this story is evolving by each day, with new and unexpected events <3 So why to rush the events, and leave the current ones tangled, right guys :D <3? Trust me, everything that you think of, will show up gradually in the future chapters <3


Questions for tomorrow: Giselle surprised? Harry begging her to be quiet? Wounded? Call of help? :O


STAY TUNED FOR TOMORROW'S UNEXPECTED UPDATES MY LOVELIES <3 I HOPE THAT YOU ALL ARE ENJOYING THE STORY SO FAR, AND I HOPE THAT I AM SERVING YOU WITH WHAT EXCITES, ENTERTAINS, AND SATISFIES YOUR READING INTEREST <3 A BIG AND MASSIVE THANK YOU TO ALL OF YOU FOR READING, COMMENTING, MESSAGING AND SUPPORTING THE STORY SO FAR <3 YOU MAKE ME FEEL PROUD, AND WITHIN YOUR SUPPORT I FIND THE URGE TO WRITE GREAT CHAPTERS DAILY <3 GOD BLESS YOU <3 xoxo

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Comments

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@Starzella

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Starzella Starzella
8/26/14

@Starzella

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