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Prisoning Truth

You & I. (18th Chapter)

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Giselle's POV:
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“(He smiles, patting the free place on the couch) Come sit.” I walk in a vast movement, sitting beside him casually. “What’s the matter, Zayn?” He pinches the bridge of his nose, closing his eyes for a second before opening them again to look at me. “(He asks in a slight worry, trying to sound casual) Is anyone giving you a bad time, here? (He re-explains directly) You know like, are you having similar feelings to the ones you felt when you first came here?”





I laugh at his care, feeling relieved that it wasn’t something serious or slightly negative.
“(I shake my head) Nope, I’m really comfortable, Zayn. You shouldn’t be worrying at all. (I stand up, beginning to walk back) Now, come along and lets eat.” His hand grabs my wrist, holding it to stop me from pacing out. I turn my face while scrunching my eyebrows in curiosity, while he sighs deeply.





“(His tone turns serious) Giselle, I need you to be honest with me please. I know that you and Harry have been together mostly, and from how he was treating you back then… well let’s just say that I didn’t like it at all. So please, if he’s been fucking off with you, or even bothering you; just let me know all right?” Before I got the chance to reply, a third person spoke all of a sudden: “Giselle and I are fine, mate. (He darts his eyes at me) Aren’t we, doll face?”





I snap my hand out of Zayn’s grasp, nodding timidly at Harry for reassurance. Harry and Zayn share firing glances at each other, which signifies to me that there is something cooking up, and it definitely isn’t in the kitchen area. “(He stretches his hand to hold mine) Come along, Giselle.” Harry’s voice emphasised his annoyance, and I believe I actually understood him for once.





He didn’t like one of his close friends to question his actions, because quite frankly, he has been improving with how he treats me. Even though his dominance is still showing, and even though his cheekiness is still available; he has been toning down. “(He jokes) You don’t need to hold her hand, Harry. She isn’t a little girl, you know.”





Harry’s face portrayed a higher level of annoyance, but I decided to break his temper from reaching to a boiling point. I cling my palm with Harry’s, smiling naturally at him and Zayn. Zayn stitches his eyebrows out of confusion, but I cut his estimations off. “(I joke) What if I wanted to hold hands with Captain Bugger? (Zayn and Harry both chuckle, as we begin walking out of the living room) Seriously boys, relax. I’m happy with being here, and none of you are behaving out of standard with me.”





Harry allows Zayn to enter before us, in order to whisper something in my ear: “He gets worried and overreacts on the slightest details. (He rasps) He doesn’t know how we are actually beginning to click together.” I giggle, nodding at Harry, while I reply: “Don’t flatter yourself, Mr. You and I are not like them, we hate each other, remember?” I stare at Harry’s face, noticing a form of sadness for a second; but he hides it with a chuckle.





“Yes, you hate me that’s true.” I add directly: “And you hate me too.” He laughs lightly with a response: “That means we are meant to be together. We have a huge common factor, doll face.” Even though his words were presented in a sarcastic frame, he almost sounded honest with his ending sentence. Something tells me that the feelings that are growing in me, are identical to Harry’s hidden emotions. What could this be… What could this mean?

Notes

I hope you all enjoyed the slice of today's updates, and I also hope that the notes I will be writing now, are going to help in simplifying the details. What Giselle learned today, is that each of the guys have a bad father- memory. When she questioned Harry about his own dad, he seemed to have ticked off and gone furious; yet he held it in and thankfully didn't explode. As for Zayn, he is like how Harry discribed him to Giselle, a very worried and concerned lad <3 There are these little details that Harry is showing, which are prevailing a new feeling towards Giselle ;) Have you noticed the handholding? The over protection? The joking sarcasm and laughters they are sharing? Well it might mean something, but it could be nothing at the same time (Y) Let's hope for the best for our 6 characters <3 :D

Questions for tomorrow: Bubbles? Pushed harshly? Louis is surprised? Giselle figuring it out? :O

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Comments

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Oh my god!! The ending of this chapter was so sad.

@Starzella

Thank you love you sis and if you wanna know i am going to update my story soon it's going to be badass bec your finally going to know why hary dit it

@princesslingley

I'm so delighted to know that you've noticed all of these techniques from my writing style, my dearest princess <3 Thank you so much, it really means the world to me :D I won't be writing any stories for now, because I do have uni to attend (its my senior year) Its going to be tough and I won't have the time to be able to balance between writing and doing my projects. But, obviously whenever I will have a holiday or like a term break, I'll definitely use the time to write a story i promise. And I will keep you alerted here, because I'd mention my new story in a non-chapter here, that contains the links and the name :D <3 xoxo

@BroDirectioner12


I'm so happy that you think its the best fan fiction ever, darling <3 I really feel blessed because of your support :D I promise to read your story and to give you feedback :D xoxo

Starzella Starzella
8/26/14

@Starzella

why does it have to end now. it's so awesome, it is the best fanfic ever.
btw did you read my fanfic if you did please tell what you think of it