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I recently(at 3am) read Alter by wonderful. I personally thought it was great, but you did one of my pet peeves. You chose a picture of a famous person, and changed the name. I'm sorry but for me the entire time when it said her name I kept thinking 'Does he/she mean Ariana?', because when you read a fanfic you imagine it happening in your mind, so you don't want readers to get confused about that. I found no spelling errors, and only a couple grammer errors.


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