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Okay, so the plot was amazing, however there were several mistakes with grammar and spelling. They weren't very big mistakes, but be careful on those in the future.
You need to describe more things instead of leaving so much to the imagination. I understand you don't need to describe every little thing, but give the readers enough to get an idea. Overall it's a great fan fiction. Just work on the technical stuff, and it will be perfect!


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