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Picture Perfect

This plot is good, however I have seen it done many times and nothing made yours stand out.
You need to have something that the readers can remember your story by. It was well written and saw almost no grammar errors. I don't believe there were any spelling errors. The fact that your story didn't really make an impression on me isn't a good sign, as I've said before you need to do something to make your story stand out.

6/10
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Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/30/14

Can you please review my story The death of me?

raylee
8/17/14

Hey! Just wondering could you please review my story Cross Country? It would be awesome if you did!

Liv_For_Payne
8/1/14

Title: THE DEATH OF ME
Author: Raylee
How fast: Whenever you have time (The story is not too long)
Smut: None
Thank you so much x

raylee
7/12/14

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !