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I personally loved this story, so so much!

The title went perfectly with the story

I think you found a way to make an overused plot feel new

You put himself instead of myself many times throughout the story, I wasn't sure weather or not that was intentional?

At times you forgot to punctuate your sentences

The story had great spacing, and was written very well

You can really feel what the characters were feeling

There is one thing though I didn't see it as an error, but I wasn't sure what a cuppa was until Edie came in to the story

Overall the story was great just watch the technical stuff.

Rating:8/10

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