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You Belong With Me

So, this was a Larry Stylinson fanfic. It was really good, but Harry wasn't acting like a friend. He was acting more like a boyfriend. I think you should go over your sentences. You repeated your words in sentences for no reason. Overall it was good, just watch yourself on the small stuff.

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One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/30/14

Can you please review my story The death of me?

raylee
8/17/14

Hey! Just wondering could you please review my story Cross Country? It would be awesome if you did!

Liv_For_Payne
8/1/14

Title: THE DEATH OF ME
Author: Raylee
How fast: Whenever you have time (The story is not too long)
Smut: None
Thank you so much x

raylee
7/12/14

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !