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Spelling and Grammar: There wasn't a lot of grammar mistakes, which is good. But there are a lot of spelling mistakes that isn't hard to fix. I know this one was probably a mistake, but you had blCk. I'm assuming that you meant black. Always read over a chapter 2 or 3 times or until it sounds right. It always helps to read it aloud to make sure it makes sense.

Plot and Story Line: I find your story very unique. I like especially how he is a ghost at the school and how he wishes to be with her. It's not like any other story. Your story is full of suspense and romance, which is a pretty good combination.

I would give this story a 9/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

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One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.