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Love At First Type

Spelling and Grammar: There are a couple of typos that can be fixed and aren't noticeable. Other than that your grammar is perfect.

Plot and Story Line: I find that your story is very unique and I am in love with it! It's different. I like how you pulled out the feelings of the story. I was super sad when Harry was. I really love your story! It's beautifully written and I'm jealous of it. I wish I can write a story and be so descriptive like your story.

I would give this story a 10/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

Comments

Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.