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She Taught Me How to Love

Spelling and Grammar: There is a lot of punctuation missing and that makes the flow of the sentences horrible. Please go over and check for punctuation errors. Other than that your grammar was good. (Sorry if I was a bit harsh about the punctuation) There weren't any spelling errors.

Plot and Story Line: I like how he's hurting because he let her go, instead of vice versa. I especially love how he will do anything for his child. It shows the true quality of a man. Please update soon, love!

I would give this story a 9/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

Comments

Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.